[fic] When they know, & When they don't (i)

[rebel_quietude]

Author: rebel_quietude
Warnings: unbetaed
Word Count: 3,126 (first part)
Summary:  There are moments, really, when Jim almost forgets.  These are the moments where he remembers.
Warnings: unbetaed (I'm gonna have all my fic betaed at once, I swear, once it's a little more substantial)
Disclaimer:  Yeah.  Still poor.
A/N: Takes place in the 'greatness'

Comments

[arctic_dragon]

I really enjoyed this.
You write a wonderful Kirk voice.
Love how you've brought in survivor loyalty.
Looking forward to more.
^_^

[web_of_deceit]

I absolutely love your Jim's experience with Tarsus. Truly one of a kind. I love his quiet strength and it so very Jim. And I just love what you did with this line here,

It's against Ferengi nature - well, mostly culture - they're always about the bottom line, but there'd been only a few non-humans on the colony and eugenics tends to take a pretty dim view of aliens in general.

Just one sentence but it speaks volumes.