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October Poetry Part 1

Oct 09, 2010 03:45

Twisted Words

Rebekah © October 2010

I just felt so good,

Laughter and word exchanged

A glance at his eyes and smile

Made me melt

He was genuinely interested

I was his knowledge muse

A few over nights of chats

Of filling thoughts

Compliments

Made me special

Made me hopeful again

I felt the pieces of innocence

That I thought I had lost forever

His youth made ( Read more... )

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Comments 2

moronicblooze October 9 2010, 14:41:52 UTC

hi Rebekah. i'm kind of just saying hi. :) these are some good writings though also. i'm sorry i stopped talking with you. i don't
know why i did that. something made me upset, but i dont remember
what it was anymore now. you talk a lot about fantasies and dreams...

fantasies and dreams can become real you know? :) i hope i'm not
filling your head with... well, i'm not trying to set you up
to get hurt. i just mean, the impossible isnt always so impossible :)

-Nick

rebekah1213 October 9 2010, 20:03:58 UTC

I appreciate the positive feedback. I added more just a few moments ago.

I am sorry if I had upset you in the past, I'm not sure what I did or said, but I am sorry. I am just verbally releasing myself, not trying to hurt anyone.

The fantasies in the poems were complicated; My life is always complicated. As I understand there ways of making those fantasies to come true, but there are just some elements holding me back.