I love how you ended this one! That bit about "coffee business" is SO TARRANT! I can totally hear it! Thank you for such a lovely piece - I'm a sucker for get-together moments. Although, really, Alice - the man panicked when you left the party! - put it together already! LOL.
Seems I achieved everything I was going for! I hoped I wasn't making Alice too out of character when I was writing about how possessive she was over her coffee, but I just COULDN'T help myself, hahaha.
My favourite bit of that part is where she is completely dumbfounded that not only did he steal it, but he didn't even like it. XD
I have an idea for 'D', so hopefully I'll get it done soon! (:
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I was laughing so much whilst I was writing all of Tarrant's parts. My sister kept coming in to ask me what was so funny. ;3
And no, really, thank-YOU! Feedback like this makes my day. :D
Hopefully the next will not be too far away!
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I have a friend or two who would so be with Alice on the coffee deal, personally I'm with Tarrent too, tea is far better.
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And yay for liking tea. I have friends as well that won't drink tea, but love coffee. Can't understand it, hehe.
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I ADORED the ending. They got together and Tarrant will soon discover the joys of caffeine. I'm sure his hat-making will triple!! LOL
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So glad you enjoyed. :D
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But the story was also hilarious. "Alice gaped. My… coffee…" Possessive, are we? I think she should quit. She's gone gallymoggers. LOL.
I hope you write more soon. :)
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Seems I achieved everything I was going for! I hoped I wasn't making Alice too out of character when I was writing about how possessive she was over her coffee, but I just COULDN'T help myself, hahaha.
My favourite bit of that part is where she is completely dumbfounded that not only did he steal it, but he didn't even like it. XD
I have an idea for 'D', so hopefully I'll get it done soon! (:
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Yay, can't wait. I'm afraid there are not enough funny alice/hatter fics.
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I don't think D will be very funny, it's kind of unfolding as rather dark in my head. >.> But you never know, inspiration might strike, hehe.
We'll see!
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