The Alphabet Challenge: C

May 21, 2010 12:16

Prompt: Caffeine!
Rating: G.
Warnings: Fluff. -.-
Length: 5,016 words. Finally, some length!
Disclaimer: I do not own Alice in Wonderland (2010).

Caffiene )

character: tarrant hightopp, fanfiction, alphabet challenge

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manniness May 21 2010, 13:04:59 UTC
I love how you ended this one! That bit about "coffee business" is SO TARRANT! I can totally hear it! Thank you for such a lovely piece - I'm a sucker for get-together moments. Although, really, Alice - the man panicked when you left the party! - put it together already! LOL.

(^__~)

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reasonandmusic May 21 2010, 13:37:53 UTC
Hehehe. So glad you enjoyed it!

I was laughing so much whilst I was writing all of Tarrant's parts. My sister kept coming in to ask me what was so funny. ;3

And no, really, thank-YOU! Feedback like this makes my day. :D

Hopefully the next will not be too far away!

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reasonandmusic May 21 2010, 13:38:29 UTC
By next, I meant my next post. Not the next feedback. Although that'd be nice too. I'm a bit tired. XD -whistles-

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tammiya May 21 2010, 18:30:07 UTC
Awww, that was cute, and highly entertaining. The caffiene high had me cackling, and what an admitance!

I have a friend or two who would so be with Alice on the coffee deal, personally I'm with Tarrent too, tea is far better.

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reasonandmusic May 22 2010, 02:48:00 UTC
Aw, thanks, love that you enjoyed it. (:

And yay for liking tea. I have friends as well that won't drink tea, but love coffee. Can't understand it, hehe.

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niphuria May 21 2010, 21:06:48 UTC
Oh, not too much angst! I loved this. Really. Coffee. Too funny! But being a caffeine addict myself I can identify, even tho I hate coffee.

I ADORED the ending. They got together and Tarrant will soon discover the joys of caffeine. I'm sure his hat-making will triple!! LOL

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reasonandmusic May 22 2010, 02:48:57 UTC
Oh gods, I am just imagining what Tarrant's hats would turn out like on caffeine. o_o Haha!

So glad you enjoyed. :D

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inahs May 22 2010, 05:52:48 UTC
Aww I loved the ending, it was so cute and sweet. I found the angst part to be fitting for him.

But the story was also hilarious. "Alice gaped. My… coffee…" Possessive, are we? I think she should quit. She's gone gallymoggers. LOL.

I hope you write more soon. :)

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reasonandmusic May 22 2010, 06:01:29 UTC
Woo, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. (:

Seems I achieved everything I was going for! I hoped I wasn't making Alice too out of character when I was writing about how possessive she was over her coffee, but I just COULDN'T help myself, hahaha.

My favourite bit of that part is where she is completely dumbfounded that not only did he steal it, but he didn't even like it. XD

I have an idea for 'D', so hopefully I'll get it done soon! (:

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inahs May 22 2010, 06:11:53 UTC
Oh yes that part was hilarious too xD. I'm glad you just couldn't help yourself lol.

Yay, can't wait. I'm afraid there are not enough funny alice/hatter fics.

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reasonandmusic May 22 2010, 06:28:40 UTC
Hehehe.

I don't think D will be very funny, it's kind of unfolding as rather dark in my head. >.> But you never know, inspiration might strike, hehe.

We'll see!

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clay_roses May 25 2010, 06:51:02 UTC
Loving this series so far. Looking forward to D! *wink wink, nudge nudge*

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reasonandmusic May 25 2010, 07:57:40 UTC
D is up! -bounces-

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