Fic: Act of Kindness

May 26, 2008 12:22

Title: Act of Kindness
Rating: PG13
Summary: Steve takes Sam shopping, and Sam is uncomfortable.
Characters/Pairings: Steve and Sam (but not really Steve/Sam ( Read more... )

character: sam, author: visiblemarket, rating: pg13, character: steve

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shrinktobe May 26 2008, 18:24:45 UTC
Brilliant ;-) Great writing :-p

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visiblemarket May 26 2008, 19:09:27 UTC
Thank you! Glad you liked it.

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visiblemarket May 26 2008, 19:12:00 UTC
Thank you!

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visiblemarket May 26 2008, 19:38:53 UTC
*grins* Thank you! That's always the kind of thing one wants to hear.

And I just realized that when I wrote this, we hadn't even found out about the Devil loving the stuff. But it makes sense that most demons do enjoy a good ice cream.

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catko May 26 2008, 22:09:43 UTC
Mmm, trying on nice clothes can be sexy. Sam seems just a little ambi...valent. And it's about time someone mentioned the Hair. Fun read.

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visiblemarket May 26 2008, 22:12:21 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

(Is that a Firefly icon?)

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catko May 26 2008, 22:59:05 UTC
(Is that a Firefly icon?)
Yup. I know the quote is hard to read; I haven't got the hang of making these, yet. It's one of my fave episodes, but then again, they all are.

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visiblemarket May 26 2008, 23:02:51 UTC
Ah, now I remember! I figured it was the torture episode, but I didn't remember the line.

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scarbie May 26 2008, 22:11:22 UTC
Oh wow, this was so good. Your take on Steve was just so spot on. I could just see this scenario playing out on the show so easily.

“Cashmere,” Steve smiled pleasantly, and the hand slide away, seemed to be settling any remaining wrinkles, “Everyone should have at least one thing made out of cashmere, Sam. One of the greatest wonders of creation, and believe you me, I’ve seen my share.”

AMEN. So true!

Sam's misunderstandings were so in-character too. *LOL* Silly boy. When Steve called him a "confused little puppy dog" that made me laugh too much.

Thanks for sharing your wonderful story.

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visiblemarket May 26 2008, 22:21:17 UTC
Oh wow, this was so good. Your take on Steve was just so spot on. I could just see this scenario playing out on the show so easily.

Oh, thank you so much! That's really the best compliment I can get.

AMEN. So true!

Hee. In all honesty, I never get the fuss about it, but it seemed to fit.

Sam's misunderstandings were so in-character too.

I'm glad it came out that way!

Thank you for reading, and for the wonderful comment!

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