after rain (will fall, we'll fall)

[dracoslovebunny]

after rain (will fall, we'll fall)
author: dracoslovebunny
pairing: xiuhan
rating: pg-13
words: 2063
genre: romance, angst
summary: in which lu han feels too much
notes: for jessica

Comments

[mehrainbow]

ASDFGJJKHLHXZNVJZ o(╥﹏╥)o CREYING. CREYINGGG. CREYYINGGGGGGG. The way you described Luhan's feelings are just so on point, I felt like every line was aimed at my kokoro in an attempt to maim it from ever feeling FEELS ever again. And that last part when Minseok finally described his feelings, I was all like /facepalm/ OF COURSE. Of course, this would be the reason! (-、-) For a second there, I seriously thought this wasn't going to end well for them. Now I'm creying happy, angsty tears, and it's all thanks to you. ू(ʚ̴̶̷́ .̠ ʚ̴̶̷̥̀ ू)

/cough/ I'll gladly give you my kokoro to maim as you please if you continue writing like this. /cough/ ( ˘ ³˘)♥

[dracoslovebunny]

Haha Aw this comment is wonderful and really too much ;-;

Thank you so much for reading and feeling! I'll be sure to write more soon, now that my creativity seems to have returned to me. I didn't expect such a lovely response to my first xiuhan... ♥♥♥ you are wonderful.

[omoikkiri]

ow. OW. but also YES!!

This is exactly the xiuhan of my headcanon as well, where they're both in way over their heads, but they ... deal with their emotions differently and so it causes this limbo state where neither of them realize that the other feels exactly the same and ;akdjg;almgkalkm ahhhhh o<-<

And your word choices and everything, it's so perfectly apt, thank youuuu for this ♥

[dracoslovebunny]

^^ What a lovely review, thank you a million times!!

This is my favorite xiuhan style, the whole both having feelings but not knowing it, yet it's sad to write... I'll be writing more xiuhan (and others I'm sure) in future so keep your eyes peeled for that! And thank you again!

[tomatomc]

i am honestly lost for words. you pictured/wrote them so painfully close to what i imagine them to be irl tbh especially minseok (i can totally imagine that boy being all scared/confused at the realization that he's actually in love with luhan like what is supposed to do now because he doesn't really sure how luhan feels) and it pains me.

anyhoo i'm rambling again. excuse me while i weep.

[dracoslovebunny]

Ahh thank you darling. Your comment is lovely and warms my heart. Hopefully I'll be writing more xiuhan like this soon so be sure to keep an eye out! ^^ ♥♥

[ext_2579724]

This is amazing. You made me cry like legit tears, crying, just crying at the end- even though it's a happy ending.

This was so angsty but at the same time, so so REAL. I could really imaging Minseok as the type who would hide his feelings because he's afraid- afraid to take risks and ruin the friendship he and Luhan has. While on the other side, Luhan is this person who has all these emotions inside him which he has difficult time controlling.

AND THIS LINE
"you were never a warm body," he assures minseok in soothing tones. "never, not to me. i wanted you there when i woke up. want you there."

HOW COULD YOU. I DIED. READING. THAT PART.

Continue writing- I need more Xiuhan tics like this.

[dracoslovebunny]

I'll definitely try to find time to get back into writing... I always try and often fail ^^;;

Thanks much for liking this, and for your lovely comment! I'm glad you could get so much out of my story.