Sometimes Goodbye Is A Second Chance, Chapter 22

[realynn8]

Title: SOMETIMES GOODBYE IS A SECOND CHANCE, Chapter 22
Author: Realynn8
Characters/Pairings: Alice/Jasper
Rating: NC-17 / M
Category: AU / AH
Spoilers: None
Summary: After 5 years of rebuilding his life and putting the pieces back together, everything falls apart once again when she comes storming back into his life.

Comments

[dbn_broberg]

Oh dear! Interesting - really.
At least they're talking - so now we have to wait for Carlisle. What will Alice say to a DNA test?

Arg - cliffhangers - makes me want more.

Great job!

[realynn8]

Thank you so much, sweetie. I'm glad you liked it.

And I am sorry about the cliffy, I felt wickedly naughty, when I finished it like that. Bad me, bad. :)

Thanks again!

[realynn8]

Thank you so much. I just write what pops into my head. LOL

You'll find out more next time. And yes, Carlisle will be in it. ;) Just for you.

[frust_sheep]

Yeah, shame on me, I could not resist much longer. *LOL*

Just short now, and I think you know me: ;)

AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH a new amazing chapter. :D
Please, say thanks to Carlisle for his advice :) and OMG I'm so proud of Jasper, that he was honest about everything. :D But yep, it's Jasper right? ;)
Anyway WOW AWESOME chapter again sweetie and I'm so excited for the next chapter and where it goes from here. :D

[realynn8]

LOL It's ok, hun. I am sorry about the work you had to do and maybe didn't manage because of this. Ups.

Thank you so much, I am so happy that you liked it. You know how you told me your theory and I included a little bit of it in the story, I hope that was ok. :)

Jasper rocks. :):) Yummy. <-- just had to add this

THANK YOU!

[frust_sheep]

Oh sweetie, you really have not to be sorry about it. You made me very happy with your posting. :)

Yeah, I know and you did a awesome job honey. It was more then just ok. :) I love this chapter. :)

Yep, yummy yummy yummy. :D

You are always very welcome sweetie. :)

[realynn8]

I am so happy I did. :)

Thank you so much, sweetie, you are the absolute best!

*hugs and twirls* You rock!

[luckyj52587]

SO glad you updated!!!!!!!!!!!

JASPER WAS ROOFIED? jeez James is always such a prick.

I like how Carlisle basically told Jasper to man up and just talk to Alice. I do NOT like how Jasper is suspecting Alice knew the whole time. It's understandable he would wonder, of course, but I don't have to like it. Because is his wondering about it a result of him not trusting Alice's honesty, or is it just that he's insecure about her depth of feeling for him?

Poor Alice. First she's freaking out about Lauren, then Jasper's acting all weird....and the poor girl, unfortunately I totally know that sometimes you can drink too much and would be incapable of remembering.....

I think (or maybe I'm totally off-base) a good clue is the Jasper's-hair-thing. I think Jasper is Amber's father (and I totally love it!), but I think when he thinks about it Jasper will remember that his hair was different back then or something, and then Alice will know that it WAS him.

and CAN'T BELIEVE you left us with such a cliffhanger!!!!!!!!!! update soon!!!!!!!!!!

[realynn8]

Thank you! I'm so sorry for the long wait, I will be quicker with the next chapter.

Yes, that bastard. ;)

Jasper is scarred. And that shows sometimes. But this time Carlisle was there to help him and push him in the right direction. :D Parents. ;)

Yeah, Alice really hadn't had it easy. I am starting to feel bad for the girl and what I've been putting her through.:)

Good thinking, I won't comment on that much - you'll see soon. :)

I'm sorry, I felt very naughty when I did that. I just couldn't help myself. :D LOL

[kem722]

So happy to see this updated!! It was really great--I'm excited to see where it goes next:)

[realynn8]

Thank you so much, I'm really excited that you liked it.

Woohoo! :)