Sometimes Goodbye Is A Second Chance, Chapter 18

[realynn8]

Title: SOMETIMES GOODBYE IS A SECOND CHANCE, Chapter 18
Author: Realynn8
Characters/Pairings: Alice/Jasper
Rating: NC-17 / M
Category: AU / AH
Spoilers: None
Summary: After 5 years of rebuilding his life and putting the pieces back together, everything falls apart once again when she comes storming back into his life.

Comments

[ladysaruman]

Wouldn't it be great if we were able to put banners up for ff.net as well? :) That would totally promote the story even more. :D Not to mention it'd be good aesthetic appeal and everything.

I think I will continue with the Maria fic now, because I'm pretty bored right now. Although I should be doing summer work..heh heh.... xD

*Runs and hides before you chase after me with my hw*

[realynn8]

That would really be amazing. :) And useful. ;)

Yay, I'm glad. Let me know when I can start promoting it, I will pimp it like a pro. :)

*runs after you* Summer work, hun, summer work!

[ladysaruman]

Oh yeah, I keep forgetting to ask you this in my reviews, for several chapters already, but I heard the song "Second Chance" by Shinedown, and I heard the lyrics "Sometimes goodbye is a second chance." So I was wondering if the inspiration for your story title came from this song. ;) The song's meaning sounds a lot like an allusion to Alice's life. Am I right? ;D

[realynn8]

Your icon kills me every time. *le sigh*

LOL Yeah, the song was the inspiration for this story. And even thought it seems at first glance that the title talks about Alice and Jasper's second chance, it doesn't. It talks about their (or more Alice's) second chance at life as a family.

Good catch. ;)

[realynn8]

Thank you, that is really something I love to hear, cause I have never written them before and have no idea what I'm doing. :)

Aww, you miss Carlisle, don't you? :) I guess I'll have to do something about that then. ;)

I have to apologize in advance, please don't kill me, but I completely forgot Jacob even exists. *hides under the table* Hmm, but now that you mentioned him, an idea just popped into my head. Squee.

So, yes, I think it's save to say you'll see him. :)

[realynn8]

Oh, you most definitely will. :)

You really want me to tell? Hmm, I'll give you a clue. Physical work/wet/girl. :) Not necessarily in this order and not necessarily all at the same time. Squee! I'm so mean.

[lys_chan_83]

This chapter was perfect.

Hot Jalice smut. check

Cute Amber moment, check

Alice calling Jazz Daddy, check

Bella and Edward, check (for the fans of them)

Friendly chat between Bella and Alice, check

In resume, this chapter has everything.

Perfect.

[realynn8]

Aww, thank you so much. I think I'll have to copy your list for further chapters. LOL

Again, thanks babe. I'm all warn and fuzzy now.

[dbn_broberg]

Lovely chapter :-D
The right amount of smut.
And love the idea of Daddy Jazz - seems right that Alice would use the word Daddy.

[realynn8]

Thank you so much, on both counts.

I'm really inexperienced with writing smut, so half of the time I have no idea what I'm doing and if i'm doing it right at all.

I just had to put that in. Seemed so appropriate. :)

[applecandy22]

wow, awesome! It was such fun to read! always..
I really liked the way Jssper carried Alice upstairs, and the nightmares,,and midnight sex. hahaa great job! I enjoyed it.
The way Bella and Edward showed up and Alice and Jasper were basically naked, HAHAHA!
that was funny!
and the daddy part, so sweet! I look forward to hearing Jasper say it to Amber! lolol
I LOVED this!

[realynn8]

Hey hun!

Thank you so much. I'm really happy you enjoyed all aspects of the chapter, that means a lot to me. :)

I needed to throw a little fun in it too, so I made them barely clothed. :) LOL The expressions on their faces must have been priceless.

Thank you. :)

[applecandy22]

btw, It is very very hot here! right now, all the windows r open!

[realynn8]

Poor you! This crazy hot weather!