FIC: Trial and Error

[realnobiki]

Title: Trial and Error
Fandom: Naruto
Characters: Kakashi/Iruka; guest appearances by Izumo, Kotetsu, Shizune, Asuma, Kurenai, Aoba
Genre: Smut + Crack = Smack PWP
Rating: NC17
Warnings: Sex, clone sex, language, violence, threats
Disclaimer: I don’t own Naruto. Masashi Kishimoto does, along with whatever other people/entities are along for the

Comments

[imlikat]

^_______^

Hottttt......

I'm digging that repetition between the beginning and the end, with the little differences. Yeah. I think there's a better way to put that, but...

I'm a little too blown away by the HOT to aim for coherent. Iruka... making out... with his clone... gah....

Love how the REAL Iruka is a lot more aggressive than Kakashi imagined/created him. ^_^ And throwing Aoba in there... brilliant!

[realnobiki]

hooray, you noticed! yes, i'm sure there's some fancy word for that particular literary device *shrug*. it's always wonderful when the reality exceeds your fantasy.

[filleyice]

Omg! I need a bib. *wipe drool of keyboard* That was great. I haven't run across anything that /hot/ for a bit. Man, I shoulda gone to bed an hour ago...but then I found this. Kudos.

[realnobiki]

oh, you must not be looking very hard *grin*, there's plenty of hotness out there. but i'm glad i caused a minor waterfall on your keyboard, it's my mission in life, dontcha know.

[filleyice]

I definitely should look harder^^. I do find good stuff, but I haven't had something that made me blush like that for a while. I kept wanting to stop and reread sentences and paragraphs.

[crimsoncourt]

Whoa

One of the hottest sex scenes I've read in a while. Your Iruka...God, he's to die for.

[realnobiki]

thanks! so glad you liked the smexiness of it. and this iruka, yeah, he's a dynamo.

[stinky_horowitz]

I read this a while ago, when I was lurking without an LJ account. I bookmarked it, then I lost all my bookmarks in the move to Firefox 3 (I've learned how to save bookmarks since then). I spent two days looking for this story, and there was lots of geeky dancing when I found it.

Ah. Your story is awesome. So much love. Thank you.

[aramiahatake]

Great....so....*Passes out from blood loss*