Comments | realnobiki: FIC: What Genma Wanted Ch7 Pt2 (Pockyverse)

realnobiki

FIC: What Genma Wanted Ch7 Pt2 (Pockyverse)

Apr 05, 2007 22:10

Title: What Genma Wanted Ch7 Pt2
Fandom: Naruto
Characters: GenRai + Iruka
Genre: From Crack is born Romance, Angst and some other stuff
Rating: Mostly R, veering into NC17 on occasion
Warnings: Language, innuendo, some sex
Disclaimer: I don’t own Naruto. Masashi Kishimoto does, along with whatever other people/entities are along for the ride.

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genma, pockyverse, raido, naruto, fanfic, iruka, genrai

Comments 5

drelfina April 6 2007, 07:47:22 UTC

WIBBLE

ARGH.

Where is MORE? I need more!

Though, what's with the ANBU bit? I don't recall it ...

But Sandaime being so fatherly and mean... :P and making Iruka draw the picture...

Maaaan that was pretty. I liked. A lot.

More?

realnobiki April 6 2007, 17:45:43 UTC

you mean the pic? that was torao, from iruka's birthday at the bar. iruka never asked the hokage a question, but the hokage, being hokage, knew iruka was curious (about why so many of them could storm a bar when it was supposed to all secretive, etc.).

am working on next chap, where iruka and raido have dates w/those girls.

drelfina April 6 2007, 18:49:34 UTC

Oooooh. Okay. Cool for all knowing Hokage...

SOME ONE TOOK A PIC OF IRUKA BEING KISSED AND IS HANDING IT AROUND...

*cough*

I'd be more mad than Iruka. Really.

Yays for next chapter!

realnobiki April 6 2007, 19:00:11 UTC

NOOOOOO, it's not iruka's face, it' torao's. remember, he kissed iruka and iruka bit the **** out of him in the bar! the pic is of torao's face, with the bitemark from iruka. that's why it says 'worth it!'. and that's why iruka's pissed, because torao didn't get it healed, so now will be walking around FOREVER with iruka-teeth-mark scars on his mouth.

i really need to write faster...dammit.

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realnobiki April 6 2007, 17:52:07 UTC

glad you like it. yes, bad things will happen, not too bad, but it just seemed like it was time.

i think there are clues about raido from his small 'screen time' - in particular, the chunin exam, he flips out when they want to postpone the sasuke/gaara match, so i see a very rule-oriented guy, the perfect bodyguard type. he's annoyed, but genma just goes 'okay, whatever'.