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thalassatx May 31 2006, 14:58:06 UTC
So very hot, but more than that. So sinister and evil, his sweet beautiful boy.

I loved it!!!

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realm_of_ylith June 2 2006, 03:42:51 UTC
thanks love!!

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sambloom1969 May 31 2006, 15:21:53 UTC
*is dead* my Lolita-Orli obsessions and needs got really satisfied here^^
That was sooo...don't know a word which would describe it, but HAAAWWWT is very nearly fitting.
That 'mister' really turned me on;P
Didn't know that song before but I'm certainly loving it now *gg*
*hugs and kisses*

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realm_of_ylith May 31 2006, 15:25:26 UTC
well.....*bites lip* not really supposed to be hot as written...but yeah. Glad you liked it though! at least one good comment thus far along with Thalassa's. Not too well received on yahoo...oh well. *smooch*

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sambloom1969 May 31 2006, 17:21:50 UTC
'not really supposed to be hot as written' ...hmmm, am seeing your point. Honestly, at first I somehow didn't know how to react to this. Well, of course in my dirty little mind it HAD to be hot but I think this story is more than that, really! It has this sick(in a fucked up mind kind of way)touch to it which is in no way a bad thing, no offence^^ that makes it so interesting, at least to me. Hope I could explain myself:P (is not good at words...)
And as for your second reply: *is loving her icon too*^_^*lol* feel free to use it whenever and whereever you like *humps you*

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realm_of_ylith May 31 2006, 15:58:07 UTC
*breathes* ok I just got my rant out and now I'd like to add to what I said before.

I'm very glad you liked this. People take things in different ways, adn I am very glad you enjoyed reading it. I love you for giving me such consistant and lovely feedback!!

*gropes and humps...points to your icon....like that!!!* haha

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causette May 31 2006, 15:25:39 UTC
I love the description of Orlando! Every little detail told about him. His cloths, his dirty feet...

his foot slides up his ankle to rub against the inside of his calf.

oh how i love his feet. *giggles*

but wow, that kid is so twisted!! I bet 'Mister' is really regretting ever saying he missed him now!! lol.

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realm_of_ylith May 31 2006, 16:07:28 UTC
*snogs you hardcore*

thanks so much love!! and thanks for all your help lately and for putting up with my pestering you at work. haha and I swear I will remember to list you as a beta next time!! haha *smooch*

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causette May 31 2006, 16:47:22 UTC
oooh baby, you make my work-days sooooooo much more fun!! I do love our morning chats so much (night chats for you ;-)

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realm_of_ylith June 2 2006, 03:46:31 UTC
heehee! thanks love! *licks you*

he is a tweisted bugger!! I can't see Orlando as an abusive son of a bitch, but I can see him in this sort of light. Still looks innocent but fucked up as all hell. *giggle*

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anonymous May 31 2006, 15:40:44 UTC
new one! got to read...don't worry, i won't flame thrower you. hehehe...

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realm_of_ylith May 31 2006, 15:54:16 UTC
too bad, I think a few people here were hankering for a barbeque. hahaha no worries love! *smooch*

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todd_loves_mc May 31 2006, 16:44:33 UTC
That was really good. i enjoyed it alot. Orli was such a devious little bugger in this and he really played the older guy to get what he wanted. I wonder how many other men he's tricked like that.

very well written and a great little fic

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realm_of_ylith June 2 2006, 03:47:36 UTC
Thanks alot love!!! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. *smooch*

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