*is dead* my Lolita-Orli obsessions and needs got really satisfied here^^ That was sooo...don't know a word which would describe it, but HAAAWWWT is very nearly fitting. That 'mister' really turned me on;P Didn't know that song before but I'm certainly loving it now *gg* *hugs and kisses*
well.....*bites lip* not really supposed to be hot as written...but yeah. Glad you liked it though! at least one good comment thus far along with Thalassa's. Not too well received on yahoo...oh well. *smooch*
'not really supposed to be hot as written' ...hmmm, am seeing your point. Honestly, at first I somehow didn't know how to react to this. Well, of course in my dirty little mind it HAD to be hot but I think this story is more than that, really! It has this sick(in a fucked up mind kind of way)touch to it which is in no way a bad thing, no offence^^ that makes it so interesting, at least to me. Hope I could explain myself:P (is not good at words...) And as for your second reply: *is loving her icon too*^_^*lol* feel free to use it whenever and whereever you like *humps you*
*breathes* ok I just got my rant out and now I'd like to add to what I said before.
I'm very glad you liked this. People take things in different ways, adn I am very glad you enjoyed reading it. I love you for giving me such consistant and lovely feedback!!
*gropes and humps...points to your icon....like that!!!* haha
thanks so much love!! and thanks for all your help lately and for putting up with my pestering you at work. haha and I swear I will remember to list you as a beta next time!! haha *smooch*
he is a tweisted bugger!! I can't see Orlando as an abusive son of a bitch, but I can see him in this sort of light. Still looks innocent but fucked up as all hell. *giggle*
That was really good. i enjoyed it alot. Orli was such a devious little bugger in this and he really played the older guy to get what he wanted. I wonder how many other men he's tricked like that.
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I loved it!!!
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That was sooo...don't know a word which would describe it, but HAAAWWWT is very nearly fitting.
That 'mister' really turned me on;P
Didn't know that song before but I'm certainly loving it now *gg*
*hugs and kisses*
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And as for your second reply: *is loving her icon too*^_^*lol* feel free to use it whenever and whereever you like *humps you*
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I'm very glad you liked this. People take things in different ways, adn I am very glad you enjoyed reading it. I love you for giving me such consistant and lovely feedback!!
*gropes and humps...points to your icon....like that!!!* haha
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his foot slides up his ankle to rub against the inside of his calf.
oh how i love his feet. *giggles*
but wow, that kid is so twisted!! I bet 'Mister' is really regretting ever saying he missed him now!! lol.
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thanks so much love!! and thanks for all your help lately and for putting up with my pestering you at work. haha and I swear I will remember to list you as a beta next time!! haha *smooch*
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he is a tweisted bugger!! I can't see Orlando as an abusive son of a bitch, but I can see him in this sort of light. Still looks innocent but fucked up as all hell. *giggle*
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very well written and a great little fic
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