Amazingly Bad Poetry Journal Review - Untitled

[reallybadpoetry]

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by CharlesI changed her mind about the ice. I held her feet

Comments

[cactus_rs]

actually can't imagine what a quartz ellipse is. Is someone making huge geometric patterns with quartz mineral samples?

I just. What.

(Reposted because I confused "ellipse" and "ellipsis," hur durr.)

[with_rainfall]

Agreed on the opening line. It starts off all right, then it devolves into WTFery.

[ext_1143237]

"deux formation" is obviously a pun, ughh. Then there is the last line, "You can be my fulfill sometime." God, I hope he's not talking about his daughter...