Lies Become Truth - Chapter 7

[real_funky_town]

Title: Lies Become Truth

Summary: An attack by a gang of demons freshly freed from hell, leaves Dean unable to lie, at the top of FBI’s most wanted list and soon forced into an experimental psyche program. Meanwhile Sam and Bobby are left to unravel the full extent of the demons’ plans.

Rating: PG-13

Warnings: Language, violence, suggestive

Comments

[amberdreams]

“the constant sound of too-tall high heals” - heels

Bobby giving in and letting Sam sort him out because he saw Sam needed it - nice, very Bobby (and where Bobby and Dean are alike…)

“She almost looked half concerned and not as in she was scared of him.” Difficult sentence to read - do you mean she looks as though she could be concerned for him rather than about him and what he might do to her?

“your disgruntle brother is sitting bored out of his mind in a spotless, private cell, eating bad cafeteria food,” disgruntled

Aw Dean, what’s going to be left of him in the morning?? Getting scared for my boy now…

[real_funky_town]

Great word catch - those same sounding wrong word choices are my specialty ;) Drives me crazy...

Sam would definitely be going completely nuts without Bobby so it’s a good thing that the man is a good sport.

I kept debating on whether or not that sentence was clear enough, and it’s important for later that it is, so thank you very much for mentioning that it wasn’t. The scene between Fassler and Henricksen got moved to the next chapter so I just needed to do some hinting about her here.

The immediate future isn’t looking terribly bright for Dean, but it’s unfortunately necessary to break him down for the next section to work. At least Sam and Bobby will of course be there to put him back together - hopefully with his head on straight this time.

[amberdreams]

Ah we are always breaking Dean down and reconstructing him - he is so perfect for that, isn't he!

[real_funky_town]

It's so true. The poor boy just breaks far too well for his own good... He just has so much vulnerability packed under that fragile, tough exterior of his.