We Start and End with Family - Chapter 11

[real_funky_town]

Title: We Start and End with Family

Summary: Two years after losing his brother, Dean has settled down and started a new family, but he’s never forgotten the family he left behind and his past has not forgotten him.

Rating: PG-13

Warnings: Violence, ritual abuse and nudity with children present, but not involved. Distorted uses of biblical quotes/

Comments

[roque_clasique]

Really engaging and fun! Loved Dean-as-family-man. Great job!

[real_funky_town]

Thanks so much! It was a blast to write, Daddy Dean is just too cute.

[seramercury]

Here I am getting fully into this fic while I should be writing my NaNo story! This was just fantastic! Everyone is in character and I enjoyed it a great deal. Excellent work! :)

[real_funky_town]

Thanks so much for taking a break from your writing to give it a read. It's fantastic to hear that everyone felt in character - I was uber paranoid about that with this one. Have a fantastic time writing your novel - NaNo is a tremendous amount of fun!

[fannishliss]

what an excellent story! I really loved everyone's characterization, especially the relationship between Ben and Dean in this story. you totally sucked me in! :)

[real_funky_town]

Thank you! So glad to hear the characterizations felt right. And Dean and Ben, those two are just as cute as it gets.

[klutzy_girl]

I love this fic so much!

[real_funky_town]

I'm so glad you enjoyed it - thank you!

[liliaeth]

Aww, I love your Dean willing to sacrifice himself for his wife and child. And I love the way you wrote his relationship with Ben :-)

[real_funky_town]

You can always count on Dean for a good sacrifice and I had way too much fun writing Dean and Ben's interactions. Of course I've yet to get over the adorableness of Ben and Dean in the 'The Kids Are Alright'.