no offense to you or anything, I'm just giving a really honest opinion, but it was horrible.
I mean, your DefinitionS where like longer than the actual fic. Completely took away from the entire story, and it lost it's entire point.
Fiction and litterature is good when you know how to flow your words together neatly and be able to make sense while connecting each paragraph together to make it complete.
This was just a mess of what looks like you're showing off what you found in the dictionary one day or something. I don't think you thought this out fully at all.
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I mean, your DefinitionS where like longer than the actual fic. Completely took away from the entire story, and it lost it's entire point.
Fiction and litterature is good when you know how to flow your words together neatly and be able to make sense while connecting each paragraph together to make it complete.
This was just a mess of what looks like you're showing off what you found in the dictionary one day or something. I don't think you thought this out fully at all.
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