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ms_jokahh in real7

Koki fanfic!!!!!

Apr 14, 2006 23:48

I am Noob, I just discovered KATTUN.. I gotta say I LOVE KOKI so much it's crazy!<333333

I wrote a fanfic in honor of my favorite rapper

koki fanfic!!!!

Hope y'all like it!

Comments 7

jangmi April 14 2006, 18:47:06 UTC

what.

ms_jokahh April 15 2006, 08:06:07 UTC

What is it?

jangmi April 20 2006, 06:06:47 UTC

no offense to you or anything, I'm just giving a really honest opinion, but it was horrible.

I mean, your DefinitionS where like longer than the actual fic. Completely took away from the entire story, and it lost it's entire point.

Fiction and litterature is good when you know how to flow your words together neatly and be able to make sense while connecting each paragraph together to make it complete.

This was just a mess of what looks like you're showing off what you found in the dictionary one day or something. I don't think you thought this out fully at all.

blaaake April 15 2006, 04:48:15 UTC

can we say abuse of shift f7?

ms_jokahh April 15 2006, 08:05:31 UTC

Thank you. but I didn's use shift f7, the words came from my mind. ^^

blaaake April 15 2006, 16:43:58 UTC

that makes me feel worse D;

jangmi April 20 2006, 06:02:22 UTC

lol