Fic: A Secret Relationship Unlike Any Other 2/3

[readwitch]

A Secret Relationship Unlike Any Other

Another Unexpected Turn
 A/N: Just to let everyone know, this is the next part in the story, but, unfortunately, it is not nearly as funny. I kept it a little humorous in the beginning, but you guys wanted Faberry, and that means I have to get rid of Finn. And, sadly, Rachel needs his vocals for nationals, so I

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[yumeillustrated]

Hey. :)
It's alright that it's not humourous- I still like your writing. Thank you very much for the softer (I can't think of another word atm) continuation^^

Thank you for the build-up to the (now expected) happy ending! :D Mucho appreciated! xD
Thank you for sharing. Will be awaiting the next piece from you. :) have a great day!

[readwitch]

Thanks!
The final part shouldn't take to long because I'm really feeling this story right now...although it quickly becomes clear that I'm not much of a comedy writer.

[revanstar]

I adore this story. Of course the only way Finn could be a good boyfriend would be if Rachel was pulling the strings. She's like the great and powerful Oz... only not lame or a douche... ok so she's nothing like Oz... hmmm Maria during the puppet show scene in the sound of music. Yeah... Puppetmaster Rachel is the best thing ever.

[readwitch]

Rachel would be the perfect puppetmaster if she wasn't such a fan of the spotlight. If everyone would just understand how brilliant her ideas are they'd be so much happier!

[t8kmybreathaway]

That was really good, I'm glad you went into the "post-break-up" because we really didn't see anything in the show. Can't wait for the next part.

[readwitch]

Yeah, the most we got was Quinn's "we'll see" that led up to nothing. She probably went home and had a musical fantasy full of dancing female football players or something.

[ayden07]

things dont always have to be laugh central. I really, really love this chapter. I think it shows such compassion from both girls. I really hate Finn! he was irritating in the first season, but I hate how they right him now. I felt heartbroken for Quinn in that scene from "Funeral." I hope they write her better in the third season.
Anyway, like I said, I love this chapter so much. It makes you wonder who she was really in love with this whole time: fake Finn or real Rachel. Im excited for the conclusion.

[readwitch]

I can never understand the writers treatment of Finn. He was irritating at times in Season One, but he also had potential. He was dopey but sweet, trying to do good but hindering himself without realizing. Now he's just a huge douchebag. I think my biggest problem is that when he makes mistakes, the show acts like he doesn't. Like fighting Jesse and ruining prom and the writers called him chivalrous.

Thanks! Hopefully it will be up soon.

[bleachedgleek]

Yay! :} Loved it even without the bucket of guffaws.

[readwitch]

Thank you very much. I was worried about that.