Unique [One-shot]

[readthemedia]

Title: Unique
Pairing: Matt/Dom
Beta: None, except my absolute legend of a best friend who writes yaoi herself. You know who you are.
Rating: 15
Summary: Dom's given up on uni life, and decides to have a little angst-nostalgia session while getting smashed. But of course, his next door campus neighbour and best mate Matt enters, with a lot more

Comments

[thekeyholder]

I liked your one-shot! ;) Well done!

Ever since I had arrived in this hellhole, Matt had been the only constant factor in a world of unbalanced equations and unanswered problems.

That was nicely decribed!

"My mother and father pretend I never exist anymore; I’m dead to them anyway. It’s quite sad really; I’m the forgotten, piano-playing son they want absolutely no part of.”

Ah, poor Matt. :(

But the last part was great!!! :) Matt had a revelation, yay! <3

[chadylan]

Ah, that was lovely. :)

I loved Matt's use of the nickname Blondie throughout. It just made him seem, I don't know, suave? Sophisticated? And the way you write is really flowing and nice and comfortable to read. It was a really nice storyline, too. I enjoyed that a lot. =D

[farawisa]

i enjoyed reading this a lot. great story. i hope we get more to read from you. well done!

[shuralove]

This was rather impressively good.

Well written and thoughtful. Hmmmmm , yep I loved it. Will look out for more from you

He stopped at the corner of my tequila stained lips, biting at their very edge. I opened my eyes for the final time as he uttered one word, his lips playing on mine.
“Good.”
I exhaled as our mouths interlocked, out tongues twisting into position; dancing together in a lustful spiral waltz.
that especially was delicious <3

[hyper_bliss]

very nice story!! sweet and tender, I liked it a lot, write again, soon! ^^

* “I don’t want alcohol, Dom. I became aware of that ages ago. I’ve been up all night thinking about this, and it might sound awkward at this point, but...”
I swayed on the spot, eyebrows creasing.
“But...”
“But I only want you.” *

awww. I almost passed out reading that! <3

[readthemedia]

Oh god! *grabs a fan* We can't have slash writers fainting! Thank a bunch.

[starlight_myth]

A lot of mixed emotions. Wow I liked this story a lot.
The constant need for a special someone who listens to you, who knows you and who loves was really written well.

And the revelation was just beautiful. I loved it.
Thanks for sharing :)