Breaking Bad Fic: I.F.J., Part 1

[readishmael]

Fandom: Breaking Bad
Title: I.F.J.
Author: readishmael
Pairing: Walt/Jesse
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~10,500
Spoilers: Through 3x04, “Green Light”
Disclaimer: This is for fun, not for profit. No copyright infringement is intended. Breaking Bad belongs to Vince Gilligan, AMC, and Sony Television.
Warnings: Minor emotional abuse/manipulation; adultery; slightly cracky

Comments

[sydpenguinbunny]

So happy to see this one get posted :D Loooove this one so much :D They're so awkward, Walt's such a dick, and... I just love it :P

[readishmael]

Thanks! And thanks for your help. This one was really fun to write.

[chaosprincess21]

I like the attention to detail about Jesse's change since rehab. He really wasn't the same person when he came back, and I like how Walter doesn't actually like it/understand it.

[readishmael]

Thanks; I was kind of unnerved by season 3 Jesse, so it wasn't hard to focus in on the differences.

[heartlandshark]

“Jesus. Sorry for not being super-excited to get fucked up the ass by some nerdy dude who's twice my age.” He fidgeted against the door, and put his hand on the doorknob, only to snatch it back immediately and shove it in his pocket.

“Do you want to leave?”

“No,” he said firmly.

This visual just works for me, I can almost hear Aaron's voice and all the nerves and tenderness. Jesse's mannerisms are so spot on. PROPS! (excited to read the rest~)

[readishmael]

Thanks. I have a lot of fun with Jesse's characterization. His voice and mannerisms come to me very clearly. I'm glad they feel accurate to you.