Breaking Bad Fic: Killing Time (Just Don't Leave), Parts 5-6

[readishmael]

See Parts 1-2 for warning and other info.

Parts 3-4.

Comments

[sydpenguinbunny]

*heart breaks*

First section - incredibly hot. Just... so many levels. But so heartbreaking as well that Jesse gets off mainly on the praise (so true of him since he's so starved for it).

And then GODDAMNIT WALT WHY DO YOU HAVE TO BE SUCH A DICK ALWAYS

[readishmael]

*heart breaks*

Aww. Sorry.

First section - incredibly hot.

Thanks! That section is actually the first part that I wrote for this fic, because I had to get the dirtiest stuff out of the way.

And, yes, Walt is a dick. But I actually kind of feel for him when Jesse flips his shit, because he does it at a moment of real (though misguided and oblivious) generosity from Walt.

[chaosprincess21]

The funny thing about Jesse saying :

Just sit around by myself all day while I waited to see if you were gonna make me kill somebody else?

Is that in Season 4 that's EXACTLY what happened. Jesse was off doing his own thing and Walter came along and asked him to kill Gus. Lol.

[readishmael]

Yeah, it's funny how that worked out. I didn't expect much of this to reflect how the canon actually went.

[gogosai]

Hi there~
I already translated parts1-4 into Chinese.
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http://www.mtslash.com/viewthread.php?tid=71151&extra=page%3D1
you may need the Id and passwords beneath so you can check out the comments whenever you want.
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If you are interested in these comments,just be my guest to tell me and I can translate them to you~(while unfortunately, my translation from Chinese into English is poor ；_ ；)
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[readishmael]

Thanks for the link. No need to trouble yourself about the translation; I'm sure I can work it out with some translation program.

[delphix_sible]

Amazing. You write them so well.

[readishmael]

Thanks!