My Brother Kicks Butt

[readergirl1013]

My brother kicks butt, for the last week or so he has been coaching me in writing slash smut, while I've been coaching him on coming out to his Dad, and what to do with his current asshole of a boyfriend. Despite his best efforts I still am struggling to write the smut scene so he has agreed to write the basic smut scene for me and let me do the

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[fifteenminutes]

That's good, I suppose.
My only concern would be in him not having a good handle on the characters' mannerisms, but I suppose if you're putting the final touches on it that shouldn't be a problem.
Good luck! ♥

[readergirl1013]

Oh it should be fine, he's just writing a skeleton outline, I'm doing all the details and mannerisms and such