Comments | re_white: WIP Amnesty: you and me and the fire makes three

re_white

WIP Amnesty: you and me and the fire makes three

Mar 29, 2011 13:20

Title: you and me and the fire makes three
Pairing: Kirk/McCoy
Rating: R
Disclaimer: I do not own these characters and court no profits with this fanwork.
Notes: Author!fail in brackets.

Summery: ( They stumble through the the house, fingers greedily rifling through each others clothes, necking awkwardly as they bump into shit, sloshing cheap booze across the wooden floors. Jim laughs, whiskey spilling down the front of his shirt and Leonard has real fucking reservations about this, serious doubts about whether they'll pull this off without setting themselves on fire. )

fanfic: star trek, fandom: star trek, pairing: kirk/mccoy

Comments 8

ageofalejandro March 31 2011, 01:52:04 UTC

Jim is warm and bony and he squirms like a epileptic fish.
BEST LINE EVER!

Love this, wish you could have finished, and it's very lovely. :)

blcwriter March 31 2011, 13:50:10 UTC

Even this.

Even this.

[hugs]

shadowclub April 8 2011, 00:32:01 UTC

Ooh, I really do love the style here. I wrote something that was somewhat similarly styled and like you, I do love parts of it, but I find this particular style somewhat emotionally draining to keep writing. I think the quality of the fic suffered in mine that I didn't do a good job of maintaining the structure... hence it's been sitting on my hardrive for a year.

But! Very powerful and awesome. I could quote so many lines that I loved...