♔ {os} light up my life ,, kaihun

Aug 10, 2012 21:47

light up my life

✖ jongin x sehun | pg | romance
✖ 1,249 w.
✖ summary : once there was a time, love was just a myth.
✖ a/n : a lame birthday present to my awesome dongsaeng seisdemayo

♡ thanks to my special girls, my cutie kitten mingtaeng & my special cutie pie ohmysekai for helping me beta read this
♡ also special thanks to nice girl bluedveins for great information ! :D

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once there was a time, love was just a myth. )

exo, kaihun for life

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re_lla August 10 2012, 14:58:54 UTC
yes this is for seisdemayo

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seisdemayo August 10 2012, 15:15:14 UTC
CRIES WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS

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seisdemayo August 10 2012, 15:25:04 UTC
you should have told me. ;_____; lol. but wait, omg nana unnir youuuuuuuuuuuuuu! >u<
you are so cute and sweet and precious, orz.

your english is really fine!!! and i like how you described and wrote how jongin finally understood what love really is through the form of sehun. ;___________;

there is a thin thread or string that connects him and sehun together
TT_____________________TT

push and pull forces
i like this so much. >:(

and his answer is sehunTHIS ( ... )

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re_lla August 10 2012, 16:09:29 UTC
.....
so you found this by yourself and read while i'm feeling so embarrassed ; w ;'' ...

about my fic ... you need to thanks to bsb's song ;9 i wrote this because i love that song so much it hurts /sobs

normally i only write something like this ... always pg orz ... forever pg
and i'm not good with other genre :l ...

basically, only effort i put in this was when i tried to re-write this in eng lol
it was the most difficult part XD
thanks to vic & den ' v ' they helped me proved this fic before i posted it here ~

thank you so much & love you too ♥♥♥♥

ps. again, i promise you ; __ ; august 10 next year i will give you a whole new fic ! (but i need to upgrade my eng skill first lol)

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re_lla August 10 2012, 14:59:57 UTC
because i need comment from you guys /sobs mingtaeng + ohmysekai

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ohmysekai August 10 2012, 15:20:37 UTC
I've read this XDDD
and I think this is pretty good ^ ^
about the titling.. omg.. it's okay unnie XDD
I'm actually glad you didn't use the one I suggested :p
you're my lovely unnie hahaha ♥

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re_lla August 10 2012, 15:57:17 UTC
i don't know how am i suppose to do about this if i don't have you here with me ; v ; ♥
thank you so so so so much baby !
love you vicky, forever my baby ♡

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bluedveins August 10 2012, 15:35:52 UTC
SEKAI FEELS \O/

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re_lla August 10 2012, 15:53:44 UTC
LMAO because of you this fic was finally posted ! lol
thank you so much ^ ^ ♪

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grumpybiscuit August 11 2012, 16:30:32 UTC
Wow...the love...Jongin pretty much just lost most of the other words but 'in love with Sehun'.
Sweet...very sweet.

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re_lla August 11 2012, 16:35:06 UTC
*shriek*
thank you so much for reading & commenting! ; ;
this is my first time posting something in LJ so ... lol
i'm so excited when i see your comment here ! *HUG*
thanks again ! ♡♡

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grumpybiscuit August 11 2012, 16:41:05 UTC
Really? Your first? Wow...I posted mine like yesterday and it totally sucked so I deleted it. I got a comment for having a bad storyline so....hmm.....but yeah, I'm so excited to know this is your first. Its pretty good. I'll continue to stalk you. Any EXO fics with any pairings - I'm good to go. Any chance we can be friends?

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re_lla August 11 2012, 16:48:39 UTC
*squealing now*
yes of course ! ; v ; we're friend 'cause i already love you now ! ♡♡♡♡

i would love to read your comment again
but eng is not my language ; ;
in my daily life i actually don't use it, i use eng only in twitter/tumblr/LJ orz /sobs
so it's very hard to write something in eng this long ; A ;''
normally i write fic but in thai only ; u ;' but i always think that i should use this chance to improve my eng skill by writing fic in eng more ! XD
if you don't mind my crap eng then you're more than welcome to read my fic in the future lol ~

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exoplanet_alien August 15 2012, 22:29:18 UTC
Omg Nana I'm soo sorry I took so long ; A ; I've been caught up in some stuff lately and only managed to drop by to leave a comment now, I hope you're not angry at me!

Moving on, I really enjoyed this, throughout. Mainly because it was just love, simple, unbounded, light, glass-like love, the kind that there's no mistaking it when you read about it! It didn't need a complicated plot or a scary length, just the perfect choice of words and everyone can understand it's sincere. All in all, beautifully written!

Again, my love goes to you Nana ~~<3 : >

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re_lla August 16 2012, 01:57:42 UTC
omg di i miss you ;_; i have to deal with lot of my stuff too /sobs
and no ! don't worry i'm not serious ! lol
just you visited here and dropped me a cute comment like this make my heart skip a beat ; v ; ~ ♡

thank you so much baby ♡ ♡

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