City of Sin part 3

Oct 20, 2010 01:25

Title: City of Sin

Author: rchginger

Rating: NC-17 for male/male sex

Genre: Slash, Dean/Castiel
City of Sin part 3 )

response to request, city of sin!verse, dean/castiel, supernatural

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xephwrites October 20 2010, 15:09:40 UTC
Wow! I loved this!! Fantastic imagry and YAY stripper Dean!!

Will there be more?

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rchginger October 20 2010, 15:18:28 UTC
Yay!! I'm happy you liked it. And probably...maybe...will be more. I'm beginning to think I might have to.

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cherryshadowz October 20 2010, 16:12:47 UTC
IT WAS GABRIEL! Michael stole Anna's brother Gabriel ;___;

Also how was this the fic that I never knew I wanted and yet I needed? Slutty Dean is apparently what I want now...and no one knew but you because you added in detective Novak and ass kicking Anna. A++

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rchginger October 20 2010, 19:59:22 UTC
I'm a mind reader....also very good guess...not saying you're right....not saying you're wrong.

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rchginger October 20 2010, 20:01:18 UTC
I'm usually good at catching grammatical errors but I wrote this at 2:00 in the morning and my poor brain didn't catch the mistakes. But I'll probably end up finding a beta...just in case.

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dossier October 20 2010, 22:49:06 UTC
I liked it as is. The very sparse style suits the world building and the back story necessary for the story is there (cop, check. stripper, check) and while a line or two about Anna taking off with Michael to meet his fate would have tied that up, totally not necessary. It's very atmospheric, and I think I have a new love, smoking cop Castiel!

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whomii2 October 21 2010, 00:41:16 UTC
Somehow i was thinking Anna's "person" had already beenn lost and she was looking more for payback, but it doesnt actually say that in the story. Would also like to see them ride of to a new start (maybe somewhere else where Sam is, because if Sam was in the same city i would think he would have been tearing around looking for Dean as well.)

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