IT WAS GABRIEL! Michael stole Anna's brother Gabriel ;___;
Also how was this the fic that I never knew I wanted and yet I needed? Slutty Dean is apparently what I want now...and no one knew but you because you added in detective Novak and ass kicking Anna. A++
I'm usually good at catching grammatical errors but I wrote this at 2:00 in the morning and my poor brain didn't catch the mistakes. But I'll probably end up finding a beta...just in case.
I liked it as is. The very sparse style suits the world building and the back story necessary for the story is there (cop, check. stripper, check) and while a line or two about Anna taking off with Michael to meet his fate would have tied that up, totally not necessary. It's very atmospheric, and I think I have a new love, smoking cop Castiel!
Somehow i was thinking Anna's "person" had already beenn lost and she was looking more for payback, but it doesnt actually say that in the story. Would also like to see them ride of to a new start (maybe somewhere else where Sam is, because if Sam was in the same city i would think he would have been tearing around looking for Dean as well.)
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