Justice-Planning His Revenge

Nov 08, 2011 08:04


I sent this in to Jet for her challenge, and I think it's time to post it here.  Enjoy!

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razzie2414 November 9 2011, 00:47:49 UTC
I cannot tell you how happy your review made me!!! You said all the most wonderful things about the story! I had to write about 'justice', and we get a lot of Reid spanked stories, so I thought I would change it up a little and let him be the spanker. Thank you for telling how much you loved it.
Didn't like that last line, eh? Left you hanging? I might be able to be talked into a chapter two, and find out what Hotch wants.

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spankedbyspike November 9 2011, 01:42:44 UTC

Well, I just checked the photos just to see who was doing what, lol...

I loved that story when you read it to me so much, I was wondering if it would be as much fun reading by myself.

Yes it is! And the ending is as wicked now as it was then!!!

Great work on that scene, it flows effortlessly, I loved it.

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razzie2414 November 9 2011, 02:34:40 UTC
Photos??? Did I miss something?
Thanks for letting me read it to you, so I could see how it sounded. Glad you still liked it!
Wicked ending? Where have I heard THAT before????
Thanks you reading. Your comments make me happy!

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spankedbyspike November 9 2011, 03:19:05 UTC
well i did not know how jj and reid looked like, having never watched the show...
in any case, the story works in itself once we know the concept.
now we just need the follow up. wink

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lady_m_319 November 12 2011, 04:58:02 UTC
Great job on the fic. Great job on the visuals. Nice use of the prompt justice and turning the tables on JJ for a change. You could feel Reid's anger but also felt how terriby hurt he was. Nicely written and you did leave the door open for a sequel?!?!?

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razzie2414 November 13 2011, 02:19:50 UTC
Reid is the one frequently spanked in most CM fic, (not that I mind), but the recent conflict with Emily returning after being 'dead', and Spencer acting all betrayed just fit the bill. Thanks for giving such a nice review. My heart is warmed (as Reid's butt is likely to be, if I write the sequel).

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razzie2414 December 4 2011, 21:57:08 UTC
I just found this!!! I'm so-so-sorry (think of Sam or Dean crying that...) that I hadn't replied before now.
Thank you for you kind remarks. I know Reid is one of the characters most often spanked, but when I saw on the show how mad and hurt he was... Yes, grin, I did leave the sequel door WIDE open.

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razzie2414 December 4 2011, 21:58:22 UTC
lol, I replied twice! I have lost it for sure! Good to know I said almost the same thing both times.

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