Another Piece/Ruin (fic)

[razycrandomgirl]

Title: Another Piece/Ruin
Author: RazyCrandomGirl
Rating: NC-17 Language and Dubcon (oh yeah, I went there!)
Fandom: Heroes
Character(s): Eden, Sylar
Pairings: Eden/Sylar
Disclaimer: I don't own Sylar, Eden or Heroes.

Author's Note: Sorry for the wait ! Written for my

Comments

[gimmemypickle]

Beautiful and amazing, babe. But you already know much I love it, especially the ending. <3

[razycrandomgirl]

Thanks for helping me out, darlin. Me heart you. -hugs-

[sarahetc]

Oh, the last two paragraphs, in particular, are incredible. So poetic and such depth of meaning there.

This is really, really dark, but I like it. You've done the dubcon aspect well, I think. Sylar's incredibly cruel, but it's clear that, past what he's done to her throat, she's more or less complicit, with the act if not the captivity.

Great job!

[razycrandomgirl]

Thank you. My first thought was "Smut, smutty, smut-smut!" Then I stepped away from it for a bit and came back really mean. They make me sad.

YAY! It was dark! You know I like angst. -chair dances-:-D

Thanks for saying!

[razycrandomgirl]

I had to bite my hand. Freaking LJ didn't mail me this comment! Grrrrr!

You are making me really happy though! I'm having giggle fits! Thank you for the compliment! I think it's because I haven't been jaded by sex yet. I like the idea of it more than the act itself. Even though I like to read smut and sometimes watch it, but I call thay "research". lol

[razycrandomgirl]

I'm kind of ashamed, but happy for the praise! :-D
Sorry for the delay. lol
I told you our AU's were alike.

[threthiel9]

He watched her eyes as they searched for a God who’d seemingly forgotten her. While another fucked her against the wall of the cage he kept her.

Amazing. Just... *melts*

[razycrandomgirl]

Thank you. When I wrote down that part something said to me "You're done. It's finished." I looked down at the paper and went "Huh." lol
Glad you liked it! And thanks for telling me! :-D

[albion1919]

That was brilliant! The anticipation was so tense and erotic but not smutty. The descriptions were so thoroughly detailed as well.

I agree there should be more Syden fic! :)

[razycrandomgirl]

Yeah, I like to draw things out and make people squirm. What can I say I'm a tease. :-D Seriously I just get a picture in my head that I probably doorknob to death, but I try to control myself. Thanks for saying you liked it. :-D
Makes my heart glad!

[albion1919]

Teh Squirm is good! Nicely controlled, restrained but hot.

I await more…

:¬D

[razycrandomgirl]

I await more… Awww man! "be ye never saticfied?!" -shakes fist to the sky-

:-D Silly me.

I'm not allowed to post anything else until I've submitted my story to OMG Het and Canon (What are they thinking?!) Zoe/Wash smutficathon

I've been bad enough. I must control myself!