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razycrandomgirl

Supply Closet (fic)

Jun 29, 2006 21:08

Title: Supply Closet
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fanfiction, wash, fanfic, serenity, zoe, wash/zoe, firefly

Comments 36

fireflypenance June 30 2006, 15:22:55 UTC

I absolutely loved it. You write Wash extremely well. ^^

razycrandomgirl June 30 2006, 18:02:40 UTC

I think he and Kaylee are the ones I'm the most like. They're pretty easy for me.
And thanks for sayin'!

elizalavelle July 1 2006, 13:51:31 UTC

This was so great! It's so them! Definitely something I could picture happening on the ship :)

and Mal's last line was priceless :)

razycrandomgirl July 2 2006, 02:19:26 UTC

thank you sweetness! when I was working toward the end I had a thought. I was like I have to make Mal think Zoe finally killed him. - giggles-
and thanks for taking the time out to review me! -hugs-

gimmemypickle July 1 2006, 17:21:24 UTC

You already know how I feel about this, but I thought I'd tell you again.

THIS IS THE BEST STORY EVER.

Seriously. *pets fic lovingly* It's brilliant and all-around awesome! And that last line? *dies* So in character and funny.

Keep writing fics or my closet may have another prisoner in the form of Washbot. Just a little incentive for ya. ;-)

razycrandomgirl July 2 2006, 02:24:00 UTC

you are so sweet you little liar. I know it compairs not to Rose & Ten up against a wall. -channels Logan- don't try to play me darlin'. Or I'll have you up against a wall. -wink-

Yeah, I thought you might like that.:P

capnzoe July 1 2006, 19:38:54 UTC

Now there's a first kiss story!! Great stuff. Zoe crawling on all fours...that would distract anyone!! :-) I look forward to reading more of your fics.

razycrandomgirl July 2 2006, 02:21:08 UTC

this means a lot coming from you. I was thinkin' on some Mal/Zoe post BDM fic ... H'm ..? I'm beaming! thanks! -hugs-

capnzoe July 2 2006, 20:16:43 UTC

I'm all for post-BDM M/Z stuff! I have like, 5 fics in progress, including the blue shirt prompt fic. Here's a little taste for you...

Zoë closed her eyes and her mind drifted… She held the shirt out, examining it. He’s got seven; he wouldn’t miss one. She promptly marked the collar with a big black ‘Z’ just to prove her ownership.

Mal did notice and swiftly pitched a fit.

“Why you gotta take my shirt? Don’t you got enough of your own? We been workin’ good lately; you can buy some nice stuff down at the market.”

“I like this one better.”

“Well, ain’t like I ever seen you wear it!”

“I sleep in it.”

“Oh…well…uh…good, then.” He was a little stunned but she knew he liked the idea of something of his being close to her while she slept.

capnzoe July 2 2006, 20:17:38 UTC

:-) No promises on when it'll be done, but I'm workin!! lol

<3 <3 <3

razycrandomgirl July 2 2006, 23:03:47 UTC

I like this! I can't believe there's more coming. I'm gonna go work on something for you. -waves-