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razycrandomgirl

The Final Piece. (fic-let)

Mar 23, 2007 01:30

Title: The Final Piece
Author:Razycrandomgirl
Disclaimer: It's all Joss' fault. :-(
Characters: Mal, Zoe and some Simon.
Rating: T Cause I disturb myself. :\
Promtp: Still for
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fic, serenity, zoe, mal, drabbles, firefly

Comments 25

cmk418 March 23 2007, 06:43:53 UTC

Good God.

You weren't lying about the angst. Intense. And depressing as hell.

But really well done. That ending though... ouch.

razycrandomgirl March 23 2007, 15:13:12 UTC

It's still haunting me.

archbishopm March 23 2007, 10:46:56 UTC

Ouch.

Very good drabble.

razycrandomgirl March 23 2007, 15:03:48 UTC

I feel wicked ...

But your icon makes me smirk.

bookaddict43 March 23 2007, 10:59:22 UTC

It's beautiful but so sad. You gave everyone's feelings so well. That last line was really perfect...

razycrandomgirl March 23 2007, 15:08:05 UTC

Thank you.

I really like Zoe, so I don't know why I did this to her. I was just so very angry. And I don't understand how everyone can just "move on". Like "Oh we better put out an add for a new pilot, this one expired." And I'm like where's the pain!?

Sorry. -sigh-

fireflypenance March 23 2007, 13:34:56 UTC

Ouch. x.x Nicely done, but still... ouch.

Very intense.

razycrandomgirl March 23 2007, 15:11:12 UTC

Yeah I know ... I'm sorry. I think I'm still a little bitter about the whole thing. :x

antyureff March 23 2007, 16:44:38 UTC

Way to facilitate those hidden scars in us! Love it! It makes me feel vulnerable and right there with them. Much appreciated!

razycrandomgirl March 25 2007, 17:51:29 UTC

THanks for saying. I really do like Zoe (She's my favorite) and so (as weird as it sounds) I feel like I have to protect her. There are so many people out there just ignoring her and her pain and this was my way of saying "you can't ignore this."