The Wages of Sin

Sep 25, 2011 02:40


Title: The Wages of Sin

Fandom: Vampire Diaries

Rating: PG

Word Count: 466

Characters/Pairings: Bonnie, Tyler

Disclaimer: Don’t own.

Spoilers/Time Line: none/post 206

Summery: Bonnie has bad dreams that seem a little too real.
Author’s Notes: I had a dream one night, woke up and wrote this down. prompt #9 'Branded' Alta I still owe you a story!

Blame it on the moon )

fic, vampire diaries, prompts

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stainofmylove September 25 2011, 12:36:06 UTC
Damn. The heat, the pressure, the blood, all of it is so palpable here. This is so dangerous and so sensual, I really love it.

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razycrandomgirl September 25 2011, 16:22:43 UTC
Can you believe "Does this qualify as blood play?" was actually a question I was confused about? :D Thank you! *flails*

Even if the show won't acknowledge that the Salvatore's conspired to kill Tyler's Uncle and Bonnie actually contributed to it, I won't forget that Mason died in their living room and the next day they went to a party at Tyler's house. O_O

And I can't believe they have Tyler feeling sorry for biting Damon ... But I digress. :X Thank you again. sorry!lol

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angary September 25 2011, 16:12:07 UTC
Totally seconding the dangerous tone in this! It's also very intense and visceral - I love that you framed this around Bonnie's dreams. They do seem like the kind of dreams she would have, but waay more sensual, lol. Great job!

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razycrandomgirl September 25 2011, 17:42:09 UTC
Well, Tyler is a werewolf ... Danger Will Robinson. ;)

:D THANK YOU! :D

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albion1919 September 25 2011, 16:56:19 UTC
Oh I loved this! Isn't it great when dreams give you inspiration? This was dangerous, a sense of threat but the end gave it quite a tender feeling.

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razycrandomgirl September 25 2011, 17:23:12 UTC
YES! And I love it when I can get to a notebook and jot it down real quick. :)

I can see that. Tyler is losing his family all over the place and as far as the show's concerned Bonnie has none. They should be drawn to each other. One witch, one werewolf, in a sea of growing vampires and dying humans ...

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angryzen September 25 2011, 17:19:53 UTC
“Whose blood is this, Bennett?”

Damn. This question just sounds so scary when you think about Mason. And the last line is amazing because of that too. Good job!

I'm still working on your story. Lol. But as of last night, I think I've figured out how I'm going to end it.

You should write more Tyler/Bonnie!

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razycrandomgirl September 25 2011, 17:27:05 UTC
ALTA! YOU ARE IN MY HEAD! O_O

Actually I'm still working on your story. lol

I will write more. These two have lots to discuss. :D Thank you! xox

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gimmemypickle September 25 2011, 23:49:13 UTC

... )

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razycrandomgirl September 25 2011, 23:51:54 UTC
LOL I love you! oxox

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