meme stolen from bellonablack

[razycrandomgirl]

If I made Cinderella, the audience would immediately be looking for a body in the coach. -Alfred Hitchcock

When I write a story, what do you as a read immediately look for/notice?

Comments

[bellonablack]

Brilliant sensory imagery and a great back and forth between male and female. Female is usually very unique and smart and fun. :) It's just very realistic. :)

[razycrandomgirl]

:D you made my night ... Again!

[razycrandomgirl]

:D I'm glad I got their feelings across. I try and I do love the feel what they do or make it so that you can feel it. :D Thanks Jessica.