Of Condemnation and Mercy (remix!fic)

May 31, 2010 14:07


Title: Of Condemnation and Mercy

Fandom: Heroes

Rating: PG-13

Word Count: 2150

Characters/Pairings: Eden, Maya,Sylar

Disclaimer: Don’t own.

Spoilers/Time Line: AU, Kindness of Strangers

Summery: Sylar couldn't remember when his dreams had become so detailed. He used to dream exclusively in gray.
Author’s Notes: Remixredux08 challenge. ( Read more... )

gift!fic, fic, maya herrera, sylar, saya, heroes

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gimmemypickle May 31 2010, 18:23:37 UTC
Still amazing! :)

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razycrandomgirl May 31 2010, 18:33:14 UTC
And I'm bad. I'm gonna go credit you right now.

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albion1919 May 31 2010, 18:34:55 UTC
*blissful sigh* I've missed this so much.

This was so dark, twisted and sexy. Amazing. The dreams with Eden were freaky and I detected some King in there ;)

Maya's confession was so creepy and I imagine that it was the first time she had told anyone. So her pushing him out could either be her fear that she would ultimately kill him or the fact that he knows what she did and would think differently of her.

MORE POR FAVOR!

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razycrandomgirl May 31 2010, 18:42:07 UTC
SQUEEEEEE! the person I remixed it for said the same thing! haha Around that time I was reading Pet Semetary. CAN YOU TELL!? :D

I'm doing a happy dance and now I have to go to my grandma's house. :D

And YAY! when I had that thought I was like \o/! He knows her secret and she can't be near him after that. It's like she contaminated him now.

WILL DO! :D And thank you Tammy!

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force_oblique May 31 2010, 18:57:16 UTC
Wow this was awesome hunni!
Eden...the image of her shot tormenting him..was just amazing and chilling!!

Por favor, no puedo parar. Espero que les sobreviven.
what does that mean?
I hope they survive?

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razycrandomgirl June 1 2010, 02:13:50 UTC
I thought it was 'I hope you survive' but if it's wrong I will change it. :X

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onimosity May 31 2010, 20:57:17 UTC
I love this fic but stories like this make me realize what a waste of good characters and good ideas 'Heroes' became. Whoever thought of the whole "have Sylar kill all the interesting characters" plot should never work again. And you should take their job and turn fics like this into screenplays and I will watch them and squeal. The end.

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razycrandomgirl June 1 2010, 02:27:38 UTC
You are a sweetheart! :D thank you so much for your kind words. Sometimes the creators cannot be trusted with their own characters and I would much rather read fan creations then watch Heroes (mess it up).

That icon is the cutest.

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bellonablack June 1 2010, 00:12:46 UTC
Successfully disturbed and creeped me out in the most romantic way. I mean, I liked the characters and felt sorry, and felt sorry for Sylar's torment in his head though...course he deserved it. Wow, you know? I liked it.

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razycrandomgirl June 1 2010, 02:37:24 UTC
Thank you. I think your story was way more disturbing than mine, but I thank you for the complement.

xoox

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