Red Flags & White Cotton (fic)

[razycrandomgirl]

Title: Red Flags & White Cotton

Fandom: Heroes

Rating: R (sexy stuff...)

Word Count: 647

Characters/Pairings: Gabriel/Maya

Disclaimer: Don’t own.

Spoilers/Time Line: AU

Summery: Growing attraction that happens just beyond the church walls.

Author’s Notes: Story inspired by bellonablack 's Taboo

PROMPT TABLES Un_love_you prompt # 16 "I want to break you."

Comments

[gimmemypickle]

Whoa! I can't believe I missed this one. It's so real and gritty and there's these dark undertones that make me all twitchy.

Wonderfully written, darling!

[razycrandomgirl]

I feel pretty about this. I was/am very proud of this one. But I'm bummed at it's reception. I woke up today rubbing my hands together like "I can't wait to read the comments." And then when I got on it was like crickets. LOL

That's so embarrassing. F5 is crying from the abuse I put it through today. :x

Thanks Rachel.:x

[gimmemypickle]

You should be. You've totally outdone yourself on this one.

I think it probably just got pushed down on flists by lots of people posting and people didn't see it.

It's great, you're great and if anyone doesn't think it's great, then that's just CRAZY. The characterizations are freakin' epic.

[razycrandomgirl]

Your mom.(IDK I can't stop myself) You're my friend you're supposed to say that! *cries into the computer screen*

I still love you. xoxo

[albion1919]

GUHGUHGUHGUH!!!!!!!

God that was delayed gratification at it's finest. Gabriel must be winding tighter and tighter, she's pushing it. Is she waiting for marriage? I love the way have all these tactile descriptions, tis sexy.

Sorry I didn't read it yesterday, I finished work at 9 and was really tired when I got home (got up late to lol)

Ahh look at them sitting next to each other at church! :p

[razycrandomgirl]

:D
I think Maya is waiting as long as she can. But they keep acting like they do I don't know if they'll make it. :X
It's funny you should say that! I was listening to a Soundgarden song named Tighter & Tighter. *g*

I am so embarrassed. I was staring at my Gmail all day. O_O That is some pathetic behavior. I blame the snow!

Make that Money, Tammy! Make it rain! But don't over work yourself.

ETA

I think there's one other group I didn't post to and I might link there today. :O

Duh!

[razycrandomgirl]

Also thank you! :D

Re: Duh!

[albion1919]

Oh at the rate they're going they'd be "doomed" before they get to the church steps ;)

Aww I'm sorry you've been waiting. Spam it everywhere!

lol I'm trying. Last night it was a PS class and I learned how to mask hair so it's detailed.

You're welcome!!

[eternal_moonie]

totaly awesome!!

[razycrandomgirl]

And you rock, sweetheart. ♥

[force_oblique]

Whoah!
That was so hot!

[razycrandomgirl]

Thank you for being a sweetheart and reading this. I'm glad you reviewed too! oxoxox

:D