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razycrandomgirl

Unsatisfied Mind (fic)

Jan 23, 2010 15:18

Title: Unsatisfied Mind

Fandom: Heroes

Rating: PG- 13

Word Count: 352

Characters/Pairings: Maya/Sylar

Disclaimer: Don’t own.

Spoilers/Time Line: Vol.2 "The Line"

Summery: I put this hook inside So you won't soon forget
Author’s Notes: This was inspired by this pic spam over at sylar_maya

PROMPT TABLES Un_love_you prompt # 2 "I was wrong about you."
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fic, maya herrera, un_love_you, sylar, saya, heroes, 100 maya stories!

Comments 9

albion1919 January 23 2010, 20:24:19 UTC

Oh this was completely sensual and mmm. When he ignores her pain to focus on his own was so him.

And he totally checks her out in that scene ;)

razycrandomgirl January 23 2010, 20:32:29 UTC

At least twice. He was like mmmmm *leers*

and he laughed when Alejandro woke up. O_o

albion1919 January 23 2010, 20:37:29 UTC

That kind of leering I can handle because they can't do much else.

lol because he got away with it. And then Maya has this big grin on her face when he's all FFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUU looking at Ale XD

COCK BLOCKED! HAHHAHA! razycrandomgirl January 23 2010, 21:08:36 UTC

True. he really liked those shorts. :x *giggles*

He pulled away and she did smile! lol

"It can be wonderful!" is very suggestive. And I can't help but look at it from her POV.

themaskedmckay January 24 2010, 03:33:07 UTC

Unf!~ Your descriptive language totally evokes the heat of their trip. Both sexually and weather-wise. Every time I watched a scene with them I felt overheated!

Very nicely done!

razycrandomgirl January 24 2010, 04:45:22 UTC

*does a wiggly happy dance in my mattress*

Thank you for saying. *tackle hugs*

gimmemypickle January 24 2010, 08:35:09 UTC

Darkly fantastic!

eternal_moonie January 24 2010, 14:35:08 UTC

totally awesome new story honey!

razycrandomgirl January 28 2010, 22:00:45 UTC

:) Thanks sweetie.