The Commute (fic)

[razycrandomgirl]

Author: Razycrandomgirl

Title: The Commute

Fandom: Heroes

Rating: PG13

Word Count: 2814

Characters/Pairings: Gabriel/Maya

Disclaimer: Don’t own. Kring can have it.

Spoilers/Time Line: AU

Summery: He takes the bus more often than not, now.

Author’s Notes: Inspired by the Subway Stories series that was on HBO so many years ago.

Prompts: 100heroesfics #

Comments

[sarah_1228]

awesomeness :D

[razycrandomgirl]

Thank ya kindly!

[gimmemypickle]

This was just gorgeous, darling!

[razycrandomgirl]

your mom!

I mean

lol thank you oxoxo

[albion1919]

Oh wow you've outdone yourself! That was brilliant and omg so sensual *fans self*

So he doesn't take the subway because it reminds him of Eden? Aww. I loved all the covert touching, it was soo hot and the tetchy 'tude they both had for awhile.

lol I love the reference to the crystals!

Aww at the end, going home together! :D ^_^

[razycrandomgirl]

So he doesn't take the subway because it reminds him of Eden?

*is caught* I never said that! O_O I've had this one in my folder for so long. When I started it didn't even have all the touching in it.

Oh wow you've outdone yourself!

=-O Thank you Tammy! *flails*

They need to walk and talk. Get to know each other first. (even though they totally put the cart ahead of the horse *grin*).

[albion1919]

Muaha, can't hide covert Gabden from me :P

You're welcome, it was so great!

Can you blame them? So hot!!

Aww I can see them taking walks. I keep picturing that scene from the Away We Go trailer where they're at the hotel and they're seated at the pool with icecream ^_^

[razycrandomgirl]

*blush* you are a detective.

:D

They really are. I love them!

Away we go! So sweet! I really enjoyed that movie. When the internets shut off for me I got a writing fever.

[bellonablack]

Aw, this was so kinda sweet but kinda tense. LOL, you know, Gabriel....but yet she saved him a seat.

And he thought they were boyfried and girlfriend.

...and he's been his petty self lol, abou the book. BUT STILL YOU DO SENSUAL LIKE YOU OWN IT.

I love this. This is wonderful in so many ways. <3 Your words are so all-natural, saying so much...and lol AT HIM HIDING IN HIS SHOP. HAHEHEHE (I know, I get glee from this)

Dante reference!!! FTW.

and in the end <3 is sweet. Very sweet. :-)

[razycrandomgirl]

I think I need to get to the part where they introduce themselves ... eventually. I like it when they tell each other there names.

Awww thank you. You are too kind.

She saved him a seat. She liked him.

I think I read to the 5th level. Which everyone had the trees.

When he finds out they're related he's gonna feel like an idiot. They are twins, Gabriel! You should look harder.

[eternal_moonie]

totally love it!!!!

[razycrandomgirl]

Oh my! Thank you! :D It makes me giddy!