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Primum non nocere (fic)

Jun 09, 2009 23:34

Author: Razycrandomgirl

Title: Primum non nocere

Fandom: Heroes/Dollhouse (sorta)

Rating: PG-13

Word Count: 3177 give or take

Characters/Pairings: Gabriel/Maya

Disclaimer: Don’t own. belonging too Kring and Whedon.

Spoilers/Time Line: Heroes bits of Vol 2-3 (nothing huge because AU

Summery: bellonablack asked for Gabriel shrinking Maya. This is me attempting that. ( Read more... )

fic, un_love_you, heroes, prompts, 100 maya stories!, gift!fic, maya herrera, gabriel gray, maybriel

Comments 10

bellonablack June 10 2009, 06:06:25 UTC

Okay--this blew me away ( ... )

razycrandomgirl June 10 2009, 06:34:45 UTC

Well, I'm glad you liked it. That's all that matters.

Yeah, brothers and sisters being siblings. That's how me and my brother were when we were little.

Once he accidentally locked me in a trunk when I was way smaller. My mom had to bust me out with a crowbar and I didn't even know it was stuck (... or I liked being in there).

I love how you dig and find stuff I didn't even know was there.

you rock!

bellonablack June 10 2009, 06:44:36 UTC

Awww-- XD

BUT ARGHGOD! To the trunk thing. I bet your mother wanted to kick his ass. O_O

Man that's not even the surface. There was a lot of subconcious little ticks in this that I thought was wonderful, and just good psychological in general. Good character study <3. They were kind of childlike in their way, and I loved it. :-)

WONDERFUL! (is happy)

razycrandomgirl June 10 2009, 10:28:21 UTC

I did wee bits of half assed research. :x yay internet!

They were more concerned about getting me out of there in a calm fashion. ;) But I didn't panic.

Dude Gabriel ... is so "still waters".

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albion1919 June 10 2009, 15:47:43 UTC

That was fantastic idea for a cross over!! I loved it!

At first I was trying to wonder who was the Doll but it was difficult to guess but the reveal was awesome. It seamlessly weaved in the Dolls lack of memory and the fanon assumption that Maya and Sylar don't remember each other. So I think she either signed away 5 years of her life because she felt she didn’t have any other choice or Petrelli did it. Hmm.

Aww man I can just imagine them all innocent and doll like having a crush on each other like Victor and Sierra.

razycrandomgirl June 10 2009, 17:00:59 UTC

Awwww I'm glad you liked it and thanks for reading (and telling me about it). :D

I was reminded of when Alpha gave Echo that sweet kiss.

I imagine Gabriel (Romeo) following Maya (Juliet) around like a lost/curious puppy. And maybe they might have to send them to different houses because it's such a problem.

Victor and Sierra! Sierra needs more good things.

albion1919 June 10 2009, 17:12:47 UTC

lol of course I'm going to read and reply, I always do. (unless I missed one.)

Aww I found that kiss sweet, but for the whole stabbing thing :\

They would both make cute dolls, both have big innocent puppy dog eyes. If they sent them to different houses I bet he'd find a way back to her... ;)

Word. And she was more interesting and a better actress then Echo.

razycrandomgirl June 11 2009, 06:36:20 UTC

I agree. :D