Haunted (Fic)

[razycrandomgirl]

Author: Razycrandomgirl

Title: Haunted

Fandom: Heroes

Rating: PG (I guess)

Characters/Pairings:  Maya/Sylar

Disclaimer: Don’t own them. Just like to play with them sometimes.

Spoilers/Time Line: AU after Vol. 2

Summery: Secretly I've been tailing you, like a fox that prays on a rabbit ...

Author’s Notes: For the

Comments

[bellonablack]

Beautifully dark. :-) <3

"He sees her here; in his presence, in her space."

This is a special line! It's almost pseudo-religious! Much love. I loved the whole general breakdown mode, of her reality changing so much (windows opening) that her internal just...

I liked the possessiveness too. :-) Haunting language.

-BB

[razycrandomgirl]

Thanks you. I love (well done) dark fic! I like him having a hard time letting go, and he can't leave her alone.

This is a special line!

thanks for saying! I did a lot of revisions and kept it, because he was lurking and invading her space. Glad it stuck out for you.

I think he's trying to make her unsure of everything except the fact that he could be "too close for comfort".

Oh he's not letting go. He had a taste and like the little he got. He is a Shadow Man.

:D thanks again! :D

[fifmeister]

Ooh! So deliciously creepy and perfectly Sylaresque! I especially love the touches of his possessiveness. Poor Maya. The part about her falling asleep on the couch but waking up in bed was a great touch.

What does the Spanish at the end mean?

[razycrandomgirl]

Oh I should have put that in there! Doh

It's her lullaby. the one her brother used to sing to her. I'll translate.

I believe it is "Sleeping Maya, in these ancient hands ..."

[fifmeister]

Dude, that makes it even more twisted! I love the thought of him appropriating that for his own purposes, hehe.

[razycrandomgirl]

Of course he had to make it his.
Thank you! I think Maya may be having some nightmares. :(

Love-sick-puppy Sylar will be getting his, though. The poophead! *GRUMBLES*

[albion1919]

*FANGIRLS YOU*

Oh this was fantastic! I love that she's in the freaky place, thinking it's haunted but it’s him!

She used her power and he liked it. He felt her reaching out to him with it, bringing him to his knees, but never letting his illusion drop.

GUH.

I loved that he carried her to bed and just the whole creepy vibe \o/

[razycrandomgirl]

And he still takes care of her, in a twisted kind of way...

I think I freaked myself out with that bit.

And you know he fans her hair out over the pillow. And she wakes up all "what the hell is going on?"

Thank you! *squeezes*

[albion1919]

Yeah, in his creepy style...

omg! But he's got to appear to her at some point :x

:D

[razycrandomgirl]

Maybe. I think he likes the little bubble he's got her in. *gasp* like a snow globe!

I think he'd test it first. Maybe he'd leave her a letter from him just to see her reaction to it ...

[dana_serenity]

I LOVE THIS! The way he watches over her is so damn hot!!

[razycrandomgirl]

And creepy!

And your icon is *sputters and drools*

He seriously needs to make babies WITH ME! Like right now. O_O phew!

[define_serenity]

Well yes, there is the creepy vibe. Meh.

Those new pictures make me horny as hell!!

[razycrandomgirl]

...

WAIT!

THERE'S MORE THAN ONE!

WHERE!?!?!?!?!!!

[leoprincess]

O_O

Girl, that is all kinds of creepy.

[razycrandomgirl]

that is love ... or is it? *giggles*