Postcard From Nowhere (fic)

[razycrandomgirl]

Author: Razycrandomgirl

Title: Postcard From Nowhere

Fandom: Heroes

Rating: PG-13 (language)

Characters/Pairings: Eden, Noah, Candice

Disclaimer: Don’t own them. Just like to play with them sometimes.

Spoilers/Time Line: Vol.1 Fall Out

Summery: She has a plan.

Word count: 432

Author’s Notes: for the Vow prompt over at heroes_contest unbeta'd. concrit please

Comments

[danniisupernova]

I had a scary dream where Noah raped me and no one really believed me. :(

[razycrandomgirl]

WTF!

[bellonablack]

Niiice interpretation of the challenge theme :-)

Unconventional but gets to the very core of what a vow is and how much it means and what illusion is breaks when it itself breaks. I get the feeling the honesty was so, so, so important to Eden, and in a way, it wasn't the same to Mr. Bennet, who did promise, but can--at this point in his life--see lying as neccessary...

I think this says so much about their characters...

-BB

[razycrandomgirl]

I thought I responded to this (stupid computer probably my fault) my bad.

thank you. *sigh* I miss Eden so much. I wanted more scenes with her working in/with the company.

I think HRG is a good man at heart or he believes he does things for the greater good of his family. I like to think of their relationship growing a little bit and Noah being someone she could look up to.

He as her mentor and she was refresh by him and how he was with his work and family. :(

[albion1919]

That was awesome! I loved that arc you see in Eden, she was very morally grey but by the end she was so assured in what she believed to be right. She didn't want to break that rule to herself I feel.

*sigh* I'd love it if Noah got a postcard...

[razycrandomgirl]

Eden's not dead. In my head she got away. *wibbles*

Stupid writers. :X

[angary]

Oh man, this was just amazing. I really love what you did with the prompt, and even though this led me to wonder more about how exactly Candice pulled off Eden's death in Sylar's cell - or if this is referring to what happened in canon - I like that you kept it short and sort of mysterious. I really like that you focused on the bond between Noah and Eden, because while their "agreement" wasn't portrayed on the show as a huge, important plot point, it was still very striking and had a lot of depth to it. You touched on that very nicely here.

Seriously, great job on this drabble!

Eden ... FTW!

[razycrandomgirl]

Thank you! Thank you. I desperately miss Eden. She was great and I feel like they wasted her (well, they did literally:-\).

HRG is good with pretty much anybody, but I love the relationship he has with the people he works with. He even made it work with Mohinder.

He was her father figure; a better one than her actual father. Does Claire know how lucky she is? I was sad when they killed off Eden. She was kickass! She was the only one willing to take care of that Sylar problem.

I don't understand why so many potentially great female characters have to die on the show. :-\

ps that is the cutest icon ever. :( I could watch it all day.

[fifmeister]

Whoa, that was fantastic! Great idea and a very original interpretation of the prompt. I loved the ending, the way you just left it hanging. Seems very appropriate for this fic. Nice job!

Just a couple of things you might want to clean up, proofreading-wise...you could put a period at the end of "He lied" and also, in this sentence

In any relatively normal situation Candice couldn’t, wouldn’t, shouldn’t be trusted be trusted, but this wasn’t normal.

you put "be trusted" twice. Just little things like that. *nods*

I'm thinking about possibly entering this contest myself...

[razycrandomgirl]

lol Thank you very much for the concrit! I appreciate it.

You should! I look forward to seeing what you come up with. Please, please, please do! We need more variety.