Find Me Guilty (fic)

May 10, 2008 20:27

Title: Find Me Guilty Part 1

Fandom: Heroes

Rating: PG-13 for language

Characters/Pairings: Gabriel/Maya

Disclaimer: Don’t own them. Just like to play with them sometimes.

Spoilers/Time Line: AU. no powers, no spoilage

Summery: Jealous Maya

Author’s Notes: gift fic for albion1919 thanks to gimmemypickle for being a sweet beta. meh (sorry for the ( Read more... )

gift!fic, fic, maya herrera, gabriel gray, heroes, maybriel

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Comments 13

sinemoras09 May 11 2008, 01:41:49 UTC
DAAAAAYUM!!! Maya's a spitfire, yo!!

Aww, Gabe. So insecure. Had to fake it with some other chick to get her attention!! AW MAN! At first I was like, Maya you need to kick his ass! Gabe's been a bad boy. RIDE HIM, MAYA, RIDE HIM!! Er... :x Now I'm like, dude get off the couch and go hug Gabe. Like, NOW XD

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razycrandomgirl May 11 2008, 01:49:26 UTC
lol

you are in my head! muahahahahaha!

Gabriel .... *shakes head* is naughty. Maya needs to "fix" him.

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gimmemypickle May 11 2008, 03:51:43 UTC
It's gonna be a cold, lonely night for these two. *snicker* Or maybe not? ;-)

Love the first part, babe! Can't wait for more.

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razycrandomgirl May 11 2008, 13:38:40 UTC
HEHEHHEHEH

Re: icon *shrugs*

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albion1919 May 11 2008, 11:49:59 UTC
WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!! \o/ *spills tea everywhere* :D

OMG I loves it!

“Maya”- His jaw is clenches and his hands fist at his sides in a visible effort to restrain himself.

Guh, god how much do I love barely in control Gabe? A LOT. I love that at first you think he went and left her because he was feeling left out but then realise he did it on purpose was brilliant! I can sooo see him doing that!

I love that he doesn't really back down. Like with Ale he's very long suffering and patient with her hissy fits (the wedding). Great that Gabe doesn't stand for it.

Gabriel (knowing how stubborn Maya can be) is too tired to argue with her while she‘s holding a knife

That's lols and scary at the same time :x

ANGRY MAKE UP SEXXX!!

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razycrandomgirl May 11 2008, 13:08:59 UTC
*spills tea everywhere*

Oh no! *hands you a hankie*

I'm glad you loves it. :)

YES! that's why I love this couple. They are pretty head strong and both try to get the upper hand on some level. I think that Maya is the calmer, "happier" one (like it really doesn't take much to make/keep Maya happy) but Gabe loves pushing her buttons.

He loves it. *leers*

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albion1919 May 11 2008, 13:15:09 UTC
*takes hankie* thank you.

It's fabulous! I love them arguing :x

I think she'd definitely be the one that appears to be really happy because it's easy for her to show it but yup: light paper and stand well back ;)

He so does! *winks*

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fifmeister May 12 2008, 04:53:16 UTC
You're so the best at feisty!Maya! It's awesome. *nods* I can see both their points of view, here, feel bad for both of them. I hope they have a nice make-up session. ;)

Also, your new header is awesome!

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razycrandomgirl May 13 2008, 03:30:41 UTC
You are too kind to say Ma chere.

I lust that header, it had to be done. kimmy_dreamer

yay for feisty!Maya!!! \o/ When I was writing it I really didn't know whose side to take, so I'm glad that neither of them was really the "bad guy".

I'm working on the make up bit right now. :D

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dana_serenity May 16 2008, 15:00:40 UTC
Oooh, great stuff <3

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razycrandomgirl May 16 2008, 17:23:33 UTC
Dank ya! Dank ya! I can't wait to read your next chapter. XD

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dana_serenity May 16 2008, 17:25:14 UTC
LOL. If I ever find the time to actually finish it you mean :s

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razycrandomgirl May 16 2008, 22:39:36 UTC
you better! *shakes like a fiend*

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