The Space Between, Part 2 (Fic)

[razycrandomgirl]

Author: razycrandomgirl 
Title: The Space Between, 2/?
Fandom:  Heroes
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairings: Gabriel/Maya
Disclaimer: Don’t own them. Just like to play with them.
Spoilers/Time Line: Somewhere on their road trip to NY
Summery: Maya teaches Gabriel about breakfast.
Author’s Notes: Aww man! This might turn into an AU later. I don't know yet.:X Enjoy and R/R.

Comments

[floated_foliage]

You have no idea how much your mood icons win.

[razycrandomgirl]

Kaylee is hungry! I love the face she makes. :D

[albion1919]

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!! Awwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He can't cook and he's hopeless and Maya makes him all hot!!

I loved that she was taking the piss! *sigh* I wish more then ever we could have seen something like this @_@

You've got to write more!

[razycrandomgirl]

You've got to write more!

As long as you keep cracking the whip muse-o-mine.;D

I had a thing about him using the over as extra storage for his book. That might have come from Ann though. ;x

[albion1919]

*WHI-TISSSH!* That was me with mah muse whip XD

I had a thing about him using the over as extra storage for his book.

What do you mean? O_o

[razycrandomgirl]

Opps +_O I meant *Oven* :X

*WHI-TISSSH!* That was me with mah muse whip XD

LMAO! OWOWOWOWOWWWWWWW! XP

[flwrpwr_vampyre]

You know, it's the oddest thing how much I love this pairing the way you write it. It's so much fun to read.

[razycrandomgirl]

That is a huge compliment! Thank you for saying!

*gigglesquee* MY FACE HURTS FROM ALL THE SMILING! :D *tackles hugs*

sorry. x

[fifmeister]

Gabriel stayed with Maya because his Spanish was more than a little rusty and mostly because Maya was prettier then her brother.

LOL! *giggles* They are just too cute in this fic, miscommunications and all. Now why couldn't we have seen something like this on the show? Also, how can they manage to be cute and yet hot at the same time? :p

Since you asked for concrit...I noticed you started out in past tense, then switched to present, then went back to past toward the end. That was a little distracting. But other than that and a few spelling miscues, I'm loving it. ;) More please!

feelz stoopid. but thanks. :D

[razycrandomgirl]

thank you ... I do have problems with that, which is why I usually have a beta. PLUS I'm not a awesome speller (even with spell check :X)

and commas confuse me. :X I will try to work on it thanks.

[gimmemypickle]

Maya just loves to give Gabriel a hard time. I love that! I love this whole fic! Are you going to continue?

[razycrandomgirl]

Working on another chapter as we type. :P Aww thanks for saying you liked it.

Makes me wonder what/how I'd have to write for you to be like "Uh Cana ... that sucked. Sorry babe, it did ... and not a little." :D

[gimmemypickle]

Luckily you're not capable of writing bad stuff, so I don't have to insult you. XD Oh, oh, oh! You know what'd be fun? You should write intentional Bad!Fic. That would make my day. ;-)

And I notice you never tell me my stuff sucks. WHAT'S THAT ABOUT?! I feel like I don't even know you anymore! *sobs*

[razycrandomgirl]

*blush*
And I notice you never tell me my stuff sucks. WHAT'S THAT ABOUT?! I feel like I don't even know you anymore! *sobs*

that thing you gave me early today made me cry. How's that?

Oh, oh, oh! You know what'd be fun? You should write intentional Bad!Fic. That would make my day. ;-)

I think I wanna do that. It'll be like the narration of the fanmix.:X

G: "You're a Whore!"
E: "Fuck You!"
G: "Your still a Whore!"
E: "I'm gettin' outta here!"

Lmao