and i will inflict transapient horrors upon ye, just because ...
I've been looking over my three Orion's Arm stories and I couldn't help noticing a significant amount of improvement from first to third. First one opens with a cliche and is a little sparse on the scene-setting. On the other hand, they are in space.
Each one's roughly two thousand words, +/- 200. Or thereabouts.
Ephemeral Skin
( In space, no one ... )
Each one's roughly two thousand words, +/- 200. Or thereabouts.
Ephemeral Skin
( In space, no one ... )
How you have met Christmas?
You have brought a smile to my face all year long. ... I never would have met such a fun, interesting group of people.
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