Comments | rayne_shippers: Kaylee Finds Them

eneumann in rayne_shippers

Kaylee Finds Them

Mar 29, 2011 16:51

Title: Kaylee
Author: eneumann
Paring, Characters: River/Jayne, Kaylee
Prompt: 5, Discovery
Rating: PG just in case for sexuality.
Warning: Age?
Summary: Discovered by kaylee.
Author's Note: All previous/future lover100 fics (and everything else on LJ) can be found here.

( 22 hours and 37 minutes )

2008: drabble (100-300 words)

Comments 6

goddessofbirth March 29 2011, 20:58:26 UTC

Love! I'd love to be a fly on the wall for River and Kaylee's tell-all discussion;)

x_deathstar_x March 29 2011, 21:08:10 UTC

Hmm, I wonder who was the bigger tease in this one, Jayne or River. That's a tough call to make, but I think that River won 2-1 :D Very nice!

cedelede March 29 2011, 21:52:29 UTC

Oh how I loved River's exact count of how long it'd been since he touched her, calling such behavior "criminal". And then the way he kissed her lightly and teased her with "can I get back to my work out now?"

*silly shippy smile*

sunshineali March 29 2011, 23:28:07 UTC

I LOVE this! It's always fun when they get caught. Kaylee is cool, now River will have someone to go to for advice and fun girl talk. Very nice, will there be more? :)

eneumann March 30 2011, 03:09:16 UTC

I'm trying to keep the Lover100 challenge stories within the same 'verse' as it were. So... that's a distinct possibility. As for previous stories-I only started early last week and have posted all to CFAK too. As I will continue to do! :) But go for it. And Lover100's got all sorts of ships from various fandoms on there.

general_iblis March 30 2011, 04:49:32 UTC

I think the best of this part of your Rayne storyline is Jayne being all "...there! Can I get back to what I was doing now?" but thinking about how he misses the feeling of River's touch. Definitely the kind of at-odds behaviour that defines a self-style hardass like Jayne :D