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[sheankelor]

Title: Meeting for the first time

Comments

[raya_light]

Oh cool... I loved that! Some hints of me shining through, but I would probably be the only one to notice (in the color descriptions). And so like Moon not to let any leave her.

Ooo... Thunder... The storms must be coming earlier than I thought! Yeah! *ahem*

The only typo that jumped out at me on the first reading was in the last paragraph. The little white light flared brightly. And maybe as they were blown further out into the universe?

[sheankelor]

Domo! I tried not to let your colors slip in too much, but I like them that way.

So now, about your backstory?

[raya_light]

I don't mind them slipping in. I just noticed them because you were talking about Sister's verse so much. ^-^

Maybe this weekend... I have a feeling that if I do write what you're requesting, it's going to be a long one.

Wah! I can't find the icon I used in June (Starlights). It looks like I deleted it by accident. Did you keep a copy by any chance?

[raya_light]

Never mind! Found it! Wonder where it was hiding... *pats Ingot* good girl...

[shadowravyn]

That was beautiful.

[sheankelor]

Thank you. I had to try very hard on this one.