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[sheankelor]

Title: A Wish
Author: Sheankelor
Theme: Crossovers (poker)
Genre: General
Fandoms: xxxHOLiC ,Sailor V
Version: xxxHOLiC anime; between Sailor V and Sailor Moon
Rating: G

xxxHOLiC is owned by Clamp, and Usagi and friends are owned by Takeuchi Naoko.

Comments

[raya_light]

Hmmm... Nice. But her grandmother's book? Not that it's required, but there is no canon significance in that. Maybe, if you use anime, something Allen gave her? Or Katrina? (Her friends in England.) Or, something from her day as Sailor V that she does not have in the manga. Like her Crescent Compact! That would be a huge sacrifice... Hmmm, and maybe one Yukino would not request. After all, it is like her henshin wand. A part of her 'job' as senshi. So, what else... Can't be the bow... She still has that. Did Ace give her a ring? Or a necklace or something? I think he did...

Anyway, as I said, it's not required to be something like that, but it would have more impact on the reader than something from a grandmother who was never mentioned. Just my opinion...

[sheankelor]

I was trying to think of something that was never mentioned. SO I succeeded. Now If Ace gve her something that she doesn't have latter, maybe I can switch to it. I thought I had built up the signif. of the book pretty well.

[raya_light]

Oh, you did, you did. I just thought that something she lost between V and SM would have even more clout. But then, I'm a sucker for inside information, too, so maybe that's where I was coming from... ^-^

[sheankelor]

That would have required me to have looked something up, and they had been waiting patiently for Harlock to stop pushing. I mean they presented their idea before he did, if only by a couple of minutes..