Hmm... Doesn't seem bare skeleton in the last third or so to you? It flows pretty well and doesn't jump too much? Her emotions and reactions are in line with the time frame and situation? Seems like I keep pushing her to be more melancholy about it and she doesn't act that way.
I think I'm going to take the Forever Young speculation out and put it in a prequel to the tent collapse. It just seems to be out of place, though it explains why she's there.
*smile* Oh, you'll see... I told you she was trying to take over the month. She's claimed Dynamite, Far Away, and Masquerade now, too.
Don't know how much time I'll have to write this weekend. Going to Eden for J's grandmother's birthday party tomorrow, maybe bike riding on Friday, J on Saturday?, and a choir party on Sunday. Busy, busy, busy. And now, it's time for bed.
^-^ Pretty holic butterflies, dear. Reminds me I need to work on that one.
I was wondering about this and the tent story - why is Minako in a tent? I'm guessing there are other parts I haven't read yet, and I don't recall Forever Young. But you guys have so many series I forget what's what or who wrote what. I'll hunt for the others later on, I think I'll need the background info to understand this story more.
*smile* Minako is in a tent because no one would expect to find her in one. That, and Haruka and Michiru are currently camping across the US to lay low for a while and they offered to let Minako join them. Officially, she's supposed to be helping keep Haruka out of the limelight (too many racing opportunities), but unofficially it's just to help Minako get her feet back under her.
There are no other parts for Minako's view of Forever Young. Just what's in my head to be written for this month. Gomen. ^-^ The basis for the story, though, is that paragraph about ChibiUsa still being a newborn after twelve years. Does that ring any bells?
Like the story. This part sums it up nicely. "Minako nodded slowly. It felt right. It gave her a purpose again. And, it would put her in a position to know the people who would one day threaten her world."
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I think I'm going to take the Forever Young speculation out and put it in a prequel to the tent collapse. It just seems to be out of place, though it explains why she's there.
*smile* Oh, you'll see... I told you she was trying to take over the month. She's claimed Dynamite, Far Away, and Masquerade now, too.
Don't know how much time I'll have to write this weekend. Going to Eden for J's grandmother's birthday party tomorrow, maybe bike riding on Friday, J on Saturday?, and a choir party on Sunday. Busy, busy, busy. And now, it's time for bed.
^-^ Pretty holic butterflies, dear. Reminds me I need to work on that one.
Oyasumi!
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I was wondering about this and the tent story - why is Minako in a tent? I'm guessing there are other parts I haven't read yet, and I don't recall Forever Young. But you guys have so many series I forget what's what or who wrote what. I'll hunt for the others later on, I think I'll need the background info to understand this story more.
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There are no other parts for Minako's view of Forever Young. Just what's in my head to be written for this month. Gomen. ^-^ The basis for the story, though, is that paragraph about ChibiUsa still being a newborn after twelve years. Does that ring any bells?
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Hmmm... You might be right about the flow in that sequence. I'll have to play with it. ^-^
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Minako found her place once more as superhero.
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