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sheankelor in rayas_and_rees

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May 10, 2009 22:06

Title: Not on sacred ground - The scold part I ( Read more... )

dream castle, may'09, mars

Comments 8

sea_thoughts May 12 2009, 18:57:30 UTC

Oooh, I like it! Are you going to write a sequel about what he wants to discuss? :D

sheankelor May 12 2009, 21:37:38 UTC

I did... it is posted under the Kaidou theme... I see I forgot to link them.

^-^ I'm glad you like it. Did it require knowledge of the original story (Dream Castle) or is it understandable on it's own? *been worrying about this since she wrote it*

sea_thoughts May 12 2009, 21:39:12 UTC

I had no problems understanding it, I was just intrigued by the hints there was more going on. :)

sheankelor May 12 2009, 21:45:20 UTC

Hey! We are on here at the same time! Hi!!!*Wave frantically over the Atlantic Ocean*

Good. That makes me feel better. I don't know how many people read the Dream Castle story, or would remember it after all this time. I linked them together now. ^-^

seniumboy June 4 2009, 05:04:50 UTC

I don't remember the Dream Castle :(

However, I don't need to remember it to appericate this piece. You wrote Rei true to her character and she's always the most interesting when there's some conflict with her father. Going to read part 2 now!

sheankelor June 4 2009, 14:13:15 UTC

True to Rei's character? Really... not a little over board, or too nice? *warm happy glow* I always try to make them too nice. At least I think so.

Dream Castle, the "What if" theme story.

raya_light June 5 2009, 17:48:06 UTC

Haha, the only connection to Dream Castle that is obvious in this piece is that both of her parents are alive. Otherwise, we just assume that you misspelled Rei for some reason throughout the story.

Seems odd to me that a citified, American Raye would take a relatively unknown man to a deserted lot to talk, but... *shrug* I guess she's at a point where she knows she can handle anything he throws at her? ^-^

I should be working. Again. I think this is one of those old-fashioned non-productive days. *sigh*

sheankelor June 5 2009, 20:01:28 UTC

No... not relatively unknown....Dad's right hand man. He runs tame in the house and is in all her business while he is there. No-o-o-o she knows him all to well.

Okay... I can see that it wouldn't be needed yet. But I've noticed that no one has comment on the American Indian influence... I mean the Great Spirit. That is one reason I was worried about people not knowing the Dream Castle story. It takes place in America.