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[raya_light]

Title: Aftermath
Author: Raya
Theme: All In the Family / Hospital
Genre: Drama
Version: Manga
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~811

Disclaimer: Saeko Mizuno was created by Takeuchi Naoko. I have merely borrowed her for a short while.

Canon, spelling, grammar, and punctuation corrections are appreciated. So is constructive criticism and general comments

Comments

[sheankelor]

Did you get started with the weed eater?

Poor Seako... she really didn't need to hear that at that moment.

[raya_light]

*guilty look* No... maybe tonight or Wednesday.

*shakes head in agreement* Is the medical information roughly right? You know me and my desire for realism when possible.

[sheankelor]

From what I can tell, yes.

[raya_light]

Haha, you've been pregnant before. I haven't. I know that stress can cause a miscarriage, but I wasn't sure about all her "subtle" reactions while running. She's only a little over a month along here... But, they can just as easily be blamed on her being out of shape and somewhat stressed because of school.

[seniumboy]

A lot more angst in this story than the last. I will certainly not use the name Saeko now in my last story. I feel so bad for her now. And she's still a student....good job building up her character though. In few short stories with her she really shinned as a original character.

[raya_light]

*nods* This is where the angst was supposed to be. The last installment was meant to focus on Henri's great heroism and just touch on its impact on Saeko.

*smiles* Thank you! Do you see any of Ami's traits in her? I was trying to include a few to create the link between them. Different life and shaping environment, of course, but some of the traits would be there.

[raya_light]

*curious* Why not use Saeko? That's the only official name she's been given... (*has now confirmed this thanks to a wonderfully detailed entry for Ami on Wikipedia*) Not that you can't use something else if you want to. ^-^