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[sheankelor]

DONE!!!! It is finally written! The rest of the library scene with Selenity and Pluto is done! And I can't think of a theme for it, so it will be an optional story

Comments

[seniumboy]

Good job! I like how you wrap up the mythology. It's a little vague in detail and you might want to look it over again when you reread this piece, but overall you did a good job. You should feel happy, your story has a solid base, and it's been an amazing series to read.

One error here: Pluto collected her thought(s).

I also notice you say their names a lot, almost tittering to repetition. Just to let you know. I also like how a new story could be told about some of Selenity's ancestors ^_-

Overall you did do a good job with this. And now that you're done, you can start on the AU month!! :D

[sheankelor]

Oh... I did repeat their names a lot. That was due to all the interruptions, and wanting to make sure that everyone knew who was talking. I guess I have to go clean that out.

I'm glad you liked it. Mythology is vague... I'm going to blame that on Pluto.

[aserene]

that was awesome! I loved the little mythology bit and her emotions are so clearly defined. Excellent work!

[sheankelor]

Thanks!!!