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Jan 13, 2008 17:32

Title: Gifts
Author: Raya
Theme: Motoki / Bubbles
Genre: General / Fluff
Version: PGSM (R)
Rating: G
Word Count: ~1069

Disclaimer: Motoki, ChibiUsa, and Nephrite belong to Takeuchi Naoko and Bandai. I have merely scrounged the imaginary internet of my mind and pulled out pictures of them to use in this crude homemade movie. ^-^

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nephrite, motoki, pgsm r, jan'08, pgsm, chibiusa

Comments 10

sheankelor January 14 2008, 02:10:21 UTC

Sweet fluff... more of R? *flutters eyelashes* But I still would like more of the SilMil stories.. um-m-m-m drats, you just need more time and gumption. ^-^

As usual you were spot on with the characterization of all the characters. And I loved how Nephi was watching from the shadows. I wonder, is he still working at the Crown? ^-^

raya_light January 14 2008, 04:48:57 UTC

Nope... At least, not yet. Hmmm... He won't have much time even if he changes his mind, though. In re-reading Winds of Rage, I discovered that I had made Ami and Nephrite the second set of victims. It's a thought, though. Plenty of opportunity for Nephikichi/Motoki grumbles and comedy. And if ChibiUsa is there, Nephi will have to be, too! Must consider this ( ... )

sheankelor January 14 2008, 05:07:32 UTC

And I am late as well.. oyasumi!

I didn't realize that the pickings for Dec were that slim. So, please... please help out. And I agree with you, Senium needs to turn in his stories!

sheankelor January 14 2008, 05:14:39 UTC

I went and counted.. I have 18 to chose from. How many did I write, now that is my question?

Thread 9

seniumboy January 16 2008, 09:53:34 UTC

Hai hai, I'll turn them in.

Also, this story came out quite well, but I was confused as to that Motoki was doing at first. It sounded like he was blowing the bubbles at her face, which seemed wrong cause that would sting the eyes.

I also noticed too that if Chibiusa is five in this...I don't know, I just feel her character should be a little different. I can't put my finger on it, and maybe I'm thinking too much into it. The last line of the story really doesn't sound needed too.