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Jan 03, 2008 21:42

Mostly written while waiting on the doctor. Laptops are nice. ^-^

Title: Making plans, building dreams
Author: Ree
Theme: Motoki - taking stock
Genre: General
Version: Anime - post-series
Rating: G

Most of these characters belong to Takeuchi Naoko. I just asked Motoki and friends to tell us some tales.

Making plans, building dreams )

dec'07, motoki

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seniumboy January 4 2008, 05:32:51 UTC
A very good story. It's something original, and the fact that this is in the anime makes it a little more enjoyable. The only thing I can think of suggesting is to have Motoki think of a possible name at the end, to add a little more feeling to the end of the story. Other than that, it was a joy to read a feel-good story.

And now I need to write some smut.

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sheankelor January 4 2008, 13:24:18 UTC
That is going to be in part two. Not a direct part two, but a future part two. hold on... you said a possible name... I can do that.

And I'm glad it was a joy to read. And that it was feel good... maybe that came from the Doctor's office waiting room ^-^.

Off with you and have fun with the smut. ^-^

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raya_light January 9 2008, 03:17:50 UTC
Nice fluff, though it's almost sounding like Mamoru is a partner here. Hmmm, in fact, that might make sense... Some additional seed money to help Motoki get going with Mamoru as the silent partner.

what had to be shipped back to Crown, Inc... And a spacing issue in the "Oh my, we have to get out of here" paragraph.

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sheankelor January 9 2008, 22:49:02 UTC
I think he is, but he is being very silent about it.

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raya_light January 10 2008, 01:00:55 UTC
*snort* Typical Mamoru...

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sheankelor January 10 2008, 23:46:38 UTC
*nods*

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