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Dec 13, 2007 23:37

Title: Promotion Time
Author: Raya
Theme: Motoki / Drag
Genre: Humor / Fluff
Version: PGSM
Rating: G
Word Count: ~700

Disclaimer: Motoki and Nephrite (aka Nephikichi) belong to Takeuchi Naoko and Bandai. I have merely scrounged the imaginary internet of my mind and pulled out pictures of them to use in this crude homemade movie. ^-^

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nephrite, dec'07, motoki, makoto, ami, pgsm

Comments 6

sheankelor December 15 2007, 00:28:12 UTC

Hahahahhhhahahahaha... Thank you!!! Thank You!!!!I need that today. I really did.

raya_light December 15 2007, 05:34:14 UTC

*grin* So glad to oblige. So glad Nephrite and Motoki were willing to oblige, hahaha.

Should I leave her as a frog? Or should I make her a turtle instead? *thoughtfully* That would be a good strong reason for Motoki to work there, and a good reason for the management to not care about Kamekichi being on the counter... But I thought the frog was a bit cuter.

sheankelor December 15 2007, 19:22:26 UTC

But Motoki wouldn't worry about dressing as a turtle as much. Maybe make Motoki think a comment to that affect, or tell Kamekichi something to that affect.

And are you sure Nephrite was obliging, or was drafted?

raya_light December 16 2007, 04:59:09 UTC

*wide eyed* He was most obliging... *laugh*

Then I shall leave it as frog for now. If I have time to massage something in there about it not being a turtle, I will, but I have a feeling it is going to stay as is unless there's a major error or brilliant idea. ^-^

Shopping 90% complete! Yeah! Tomorrow will be a pain of a day, though. I need to get up early to clean off the driveway before church, go to church, do bills, bake, clean, and maybe set up the Christmas tree. That, or start wrapping. Hmmm...

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seniumboy December 28 2007, 07:25:25 UTC

Ahh, so many stories to catch up on. I've been holding back on this cause I truthfully don't care to read about Motoki. I hated his character in PGSM. But of course I like stories you write, so I'm looking forward these.

As for this story, I think you should have made Nephrite more unwilling. I forget why he's even there in the story, or why he stays. I would have mentioned something about cosplay too, and display what he's wearing more. Maybe even the anime character it's based on. I'm not really sure what he's dressed as myself. Either way, I'd consider more polish *nods*