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[sheankelor]

Title: A Reward? -Redemption part VIII
Author: Ree
Theme: Favorite Character - Beryl- favorite
Genre: General
Version: Anime/ Manga - Fates/Tainted Gifts storyline- Crystal Tokyo
Rating: G

Most of these characters belong to Takeuchi Naoko. I just borrowed my daughters paper dolls again.

Comments

[seniumboy]

Good job getting the theme into this story. I don't know if I like her talking to herself though, seems too phony considering the cameras are watching her. Aren't they suppose to be hidden? Also, she's fluffing her hair to get it spiky? I'm not sure how that works, any maybe I'm just dumb, but I can't see how her hair looks.

Time for the climax!

[sheankelor]

Cameras are well hidden. But her job is to be able to find that sort of stuff. She has already scoffed at the poor job and material that is being used for his surveillance stuff. Her hair style is sticking up everywhere and needing a brush look. Kind of spiky, but falls a little too. I'll change the word fluff though, it doesn't really fit.

^-~ The talking was supposed to sound phony. She did it solely for the cameras.