I'm so glad you wrote this part. I see you forgot Chibiusa too lol. And the rest of the family. I think when Usagi starts yelling at Mamoru, the others would have gathered around to see what was going on.
You HAVE to make Usagi confess what is going on. It would also be interesting to see one of them ask "Why couldn't we stop aging too?" You could even throw in Setsuna standing in the distance, watching Usagi to make sure she doesn't say too much (like when the end of the world is coming).
Ooooo please write the last part of this story! It would make a depressed boy very happy.
I did not! *points to the pram* She was right there!
Haha, actually, I just could not think of how to work her in. I mean, Usagi getting upset and yelling would be enough to make her cry, especially if she was already fussy, but how to work it into the rest of the drama? Rereading this morning, I think I have a way. We'll just hope that it works easily at lunch. ^-^
The rest of the family is currently staring at each other in confusion. Except for Fujiko, that is, who is still thinking that Usagi is ChibiUsa and is giving Shingo time to correct the mistaken impression. Haha, they'll come out a bit in the next chapter.
*sigh* Two more chapters. Okay... This was supposed to be a short story! You know, two, maybe three chapters? I think it will reach ten before alls said and done. *wry smile*
Grin... It was here.. a wonderful night story from Raya, and I missed it last night. So, when will we get the next part of fellow drowner? I hope to get you guys the Grandma's footsteps out sometime this week if life is nice to me. And Ami need to stop mumbling in the back of my head... honestly she does.
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I'm so glad you wrote this part. I see you forgot Chibiusa too lol. And the rest of the family. I think when Usagi starts yelling at Mamoru, the others would have gathered around to see what was going on.
You HAVE to make Usagi confess what is going on. It would also be interesting to see one of them ask "Why couldn't we stop aging too?" You could even throw in Setsuna standing in the distance, watching Usagi to make sure she doesn't say too much (like when the end of the world is coming).
Ooooo please write the last part of this story! It would make a depressed boy very happy.
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Haha, actually, I just could not think of how to work her in. I mean, Usagi getting upset and yelling would be enough to make her cry, especially if she was already fussy, but how to work it into the rest of the drama? Rereading this morning, I think I have a way. We'll just hope that it works easily at lunch. ^-^
The rest of the family is currently staring at each other in confusion. Except for Fujiko, that is, who is still thinking that Usagi is ChibiUsa and is giving Shingo time to correct the mistaken impression. Haha, they'll come out a bit in the next chapter.
*sigh* Two more chapters. Okay... This was supposed to be a short story! You know, two, maybe three chapters? I think it will reach ten before alls said and done. *wry smile*
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Thank you for sharing.
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